So I'm just now reading this. I hope that you haven't abandoned this story, I know it's been years since your last update. I really like it so far. This chapter was fantastic I thought. I loved that Lily finally raged at James about how she feels, and how he needs to figure his stuff out quickly. A lot of people go through major changes in life, and when you are a part of a couple when you have some life altering change happen, it does effect BOTH people in the relationship, just like the Potter's death has effected James AND Lily. I hope you randomly decide to come back to this story, because I would love to see what you could do with it. Report Review
I want more update, update!!! :) Report Review
YOU SAY YOU HATE WRITING THESE SAD CHAPTERS YET YOU WRITE THEM ANYWAY! WHY!??! Report Review
Wow, i've just read all of your story overnight, which is not good because I have an exam in about. an hour and a half? and i've been reading not revising..
So update soon? You know, to make up for the disapointment of failing my Biology exam :P
The only reason I haven't reviewed your other chapters is because i've been reading non-stop.
Love this story, it's fantastic, and up there with my favourites :D Report Review
Hey it me once again! Listen your a very good author and I would just love it if you continue to write. I and keeping my promise and reading all of your fan fics. Can you please continue? for me? Come on I am really wondering what is going to happen with everyone. If James and Lilly get back together. The always annoying under-the-sea-blue-sea Report Review
It sooo sad
how could you do that to her
by the way, is james under the imperius curse
thanks you r story is really good Report Review
OMG, thatsnowball fight was BRILLIANT. I totally LOVED it! Report Review
James is being a stupid idiotic prat. I mean we all know he lost his family but come ON, he is just pushing away all the people who he ever loved or ever loved him. I can entirely understand how Lily is feeling. Please add more soon. Report Review
That was so sad!
All those 'meant-to-be' couples breaking up, It was terrible. James was being so stupid! And the resounding thought that if Remus had told Gabby before her mother died she would have stayed with him. But, the way that they all helped their friends was beautiful, so true, so honest, so realistic, so loving.
It was BRILLIANT! Report Review
That was so romantic! It doesn't seem very James, but I loved it all the same. Giving 17 gifts for 17 years is something that works wonderfuly, and you're right about it being 17. But you didn't do the prank. Where did Sirius's idea about distracting her with a prank go? Report Review
Your story is AWESOME, but WHY HAVE YOU STOPPED WRITING?!This is my favorite fan fiction story.I think everyone needs to get back together.But not just so easily.They are too many volatile emotions clashing, and I think something big has to happen to bring the harmony back again. Perhaps a life-threatening incident to make them realize how much they miss the old days. That would be a strong enough bond. Remus needs a chance to prove to Gabriella that he's pure-hearted. They don't have to be going out,just good friends. That's all.
good luck writing. I'm a writer myself so I understand what it's like when you hit a dead end and don't know how to continue the story. But have patience and believe in yourself. Don't disappoint your readers. Report Review
I LOVE Amberle White.She's my favorite character and exactly like myself.lol!Tough luck,Sirius Black--too much arrogance will always backfire in the end. Report Review
PLEASE,PLEASE make it one long story with hundreds of chapters.It's so hard to find the story you're looking for on this site,with tens of thousands of stories.You're a great writer.I hate what's happening to all the characters,but a good story needs drama,and I like writers who can make me feel the emotions of the story,good or bad. Report Review
Poor James!Poor Gabriella!And poor Remus!Oh my gosh. Report Review
It was a fun chapter.I especially liked the way Amberle defeated Sirius. Report Review
WOW!LOVED it.But please lessen the romance and increase the adventure. Report Review
It was good.And i'm sorry about your operation.Get well soon. Report Review
Geez,all of the Queens and Marauders are crazy except for Gabriella
and Remus. Report Review
Love it!Just make your chapters a bit longer,ok?Thnx. Report Review
AMAZING!I love it!Keep going!By the way,according to HarryPotter5,James is supposed to be humbler by seventh year.
Make him nice-please. Report Review
i love it but i want more lilly and james action! please? Report Review
please make james and lilly get together soon! Report Review
This is actually really good! I didn't go on harrypotterfanfiction for a while, but I just went and reread this story and had a blast doing it! Please continue, because I really need, yes need-not want, to know what happens to the gang. I also think this story was not completely pointless and that Lily needed to get all that off her chest. It was also really funny reading it. I think I would like to see James blow up next or maybe Sirius. Keep it up! Report Review
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