Wow, ok, i just pushed the random fic button because i had no idea what i was in the mood for reading, when this came up and i read the summary i was slightly unsure about wether or not i'd like it but you pulled this off quite well.
I can totally see it slotting in to the Harry Potter books, and you can see how this effects draco's view on mufbloods!
this was good one-shot-8/10Author's Response: Thank you :D Report Review
How cute little Draco is!! I write a lot of Draco myself but have never tried something with him as a child. I thought u mixed his superiority complex well with childlike innocence & I adored the fact that Harry was his hero!! What a novel way to have him hate Harry all those years!!
Well written, a lovely little Draco peice!! 10/10Author's Response: Thanks :) Report Review
rly rly fnny i dodnt think that would happen but loved it
FUN N KISSEsAuthor's Response: Maybe not but I liked it :) Report Review
That was really cute!Author's Response: Thanks :) Report Review
I really like ure idea, and it seems quite realistic! I can imagine Draco dreaming about being friends with Harry and then getting disappointed when Harry prefers to be friends with Hermione and Ron...Author's Response: Cheers! :) Report Review
Ha, that made me laugh, but you do have a point. :)
P/s: Wonderful one-shot, it caught my attention. :D 9/10!Author's Response: Thanks! :) Report Review
it was awesome but i like the story The Game even more! Fnish it please! You're my favorite author and that's my favorite story!Author's Response: Cool, thank you! Only three chapters to go! Read my new fic - it's better than all my previous ones :) Report Review
Awww, this is great! Totally what I wanted to read! I loved it! I love the idea, I love the concept.. haha you should definatley make a sequeal! Not just cause I gave this challenge and I want to read more, but because they story was amazing! FAVORITESSS!Author's Response: Lol. Thank you, no sequel though - just a one shot! I'm looking forward to more responses to your challenge! :) Report Review
I loved it!!! Some constuctive critisism- The story was supposed to be about Draco at primary school, right? WEll, most of it was about him at home, with only a few paragraphs on p.s.!! Good writing,though.Author's Response: Ah well, it was just a bit of fluff. I intended it to be longer but then thought if I stretched it out it wouldn't help! I couldn't remember the original brief of the challenge so I didn't think it mattered!
Thanks for reviewing :) and for the suggestion :) Report Review
Ooh thatz clever =) gd story 10/10!Author's Response: Thanks! :) Report Review
yes, that sounded pretty much like Draco. I just didn't like that the Headmistress agreed with Lucius about mudbloods, but it's your story and I really like it. :DAuthor's Response: Thanks! With the headmistress I was going with her being as bad as Lucius, so she'd hate mudbloods. :) Report Review
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