that is an amazing story, i only wish i could have found it sooner. this realy is a great story and so detailed and full of brilliant ideas that it should be published Report Review
Thank you so much for writing this story! Saying that I loved it would be a huge understatement. The plot that you incorporated with the Death realm was something that I have seen in a few other fan-fictions, but yours was by far the best. I had however not read a story were Remus takes on the role as Harry's guardian and that was something about the story that I loved as well. I don't know if you still get on this site or not, but I just had to review and tell you how much I liked it.
-Logan Report Review
I can never read this story. Makes me cry every time. But i love it, so i'll still read it. Amazing story, brilliantly written and a fantastic plot. Now i'm going to read it again and have a good long cry.
P.s. the only story i have EVER given 10/10! Report Review
score:100,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 x awesomely awesomed awesome awesomeness
*Liz*Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Report Review
I loved it! Sorry I didn't review every chapter but I like to get a full view of the story first. I think it had a lot of great genre mixes like angst and humor. I was crying when Harry died, I kinda figured that's what you were going to do but I sobbed anyway cause I didn't know what was going to happen to Remus and I felt really bad for Ron and Hermione. They didn't get to officially get to say goodbye. Anyway I loved your story your a fantastic writer!!Author's Response: One review is better than none at all, so thank you for this one. I'm pleased you enjoyed the writing though. And I suppose it's a good thing you cried, though I feel bad that you did! :) Report Review
Oh my god you killed harry!
Nah i thought it was really good.Author's Response: I'm glad :) Report Review
I've read this story like ten times and it never gets old! I love it so much! You're an awsome writer btw.Author's Response: There are too few stories I read more than once, I'm glad that you liked mine enough to re-read. :) Report Review
I loved your story it was great. I now only wonder what lay behind the veil of the real death :PAuthor's Response: Thank you, and we'll never know! Report Review
I am only on chapter 7 and i love this story. Your story makes you really see what Harry most likey went threw that J. K Rowling had left out. 10/10Author's Response: Yeah, I did think that was one of the problems with book 5. It was such a big event, and yet she didn't cover it very fully at all! It was one of the things that first made me start writing fanfiction. Report Review
This is such a good story! You better a sequel or I will get an angry mobs with pitch forks and torches and come to your house. Siriusly(punny huh?! :)) Anyway, really liked the story. Good job and keep writing! :)Author's Response: I'm afraid I'm not planning a sequel, so if you could give me a little forewarning as to when I should expect the angry mob, I'd be much obliged. :) Report Review
THAT WAS GREAT I LOVED IT! Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it. Report Review
this is an EXCELLENT story, the ONLY thing i have a problem with is JK is REALLY strong on how valuable life is and everything and the characters all really believe that, i think remus would never kill himself. also i get harry and remus are NOT slashy, but they are a bit too affectionate not to be creepy. but you have a great dramatic flair, and its really funny and witty and i love your style. its really good! but i think if you ever DID get around to revamping this story, it would be even better.Author's Response: Yeah, I wrote this a long time ago, and then started writing the odd piece of slash, so things kind of ended up a bit weird between Harry and Remus. I always intended to give it a bit of an overhaul, but never got around to it. Perhaps when I've a little more time after Christmas, I'll give it another go :) Report Review
OH God! the story was amazing, but the end was extreemly sad... i really cried... great job! I love it! :)Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it so much :) Report Review
Great story! Interesting plot i must say... :)Author's Response: Thank you. Report Review
this is a great story!!Author's Response: thanks Report Review
that was such a good story!!! so sad though i cried but that only means that you are a great writer...or im just emotional but i think it was the first one.or both but still loved the story and am sad but happy to see it come to a close. sorry i didnt revew a lot your story was just to addicting. thanks for writing it ~rup4everAuthor's Response: Thank you, I'm glad that you enjoyed the story so much, and at least you reviewed at the end! Report Review
srry i dont revew that often but your story is really adicting. you are really good with deatale and i loved the duel great story!!Author's Response: thanks Report Review
omg i love your story it has a great plot and its hillariose cant wait to read more!!Author's Response: thanks Report Review
That whole story was amazing!
I cried so much when Harry was dying and Remus was kneeling next to him.
You are VERY talented! Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad that you think so! Report Review
Wow. Well that pretty much sums up my feelings about this story. You definitely don't write anything like J.K. Rowling but you are an incredible writer.You should try to write a book of your own. The story was amazing. Definitely a very good version of the Sixth Book, though I don't agree to Harry dying so soon. Amazing happy/sad ending. I repeat, WOW.Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you like my writing so much! :) Report Review
Kinda confusing as far as the characters go but amazingly written!!Author's Response: thanks Report Review
Very very coolAuthor's Response: thanks Report Review
This is a wonderful story so far. I'm adding it to my favourites. I'd justi like to point out that 75+55=130 and 130+30+10+10+10=190 not 195Author's Response: Well it's not my fault if the characters can't add that well, is it! ;) Yeah, you'd never believe I'm doing a maths degree, would you? Sigh. Report Review
I loved your story earlier i think you said that you were ashamed to put it under your username but i loved it! And think its amazing though ive cried so much through these last few chapter i still read on and i can't beleive i could concentrate though i had to re-read stuff because everything was blurry! I liked the story and think its one of you best though i think you mixed up some names like you said "Mad eye, Tonks, and Mad eye went." so yea thats about it didn't see much gramatic issues but the paragraghes were sometimes long! Its good i like it been reading it for quite a fews days! I like the ending alot it doesn't tell you much of what happened like what real death was like and everyone eles the students they didn't finish the school year and ron and herminionie *im not a very good speller you can tell* you never found out what happened to them!! and your never find out what there jobs are or anything like that but its still good and its glad to know that snape turned out good not happening in the real books so yea its good! 9/10 just because of the name mixing up!Author's Response: There were some gaps I'll need to fill in if I ever revamp this story - like for example, what happened to everyone else once it was all done and such. I'm glad that you liked the story so much, and yes, i was kind of embarrassed to have my name tied to this story. It was my first full story, and I thought (and still think) it wasn't worthy, and that I can write better. Hopefullly I can. Report Review
i undestand y u dont want this story but others do. it was brilliant n addicting but parts made me want to kill u *death threat* lol.Author's Response: uh thanks, I think. :o) Report Review
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