OMGOODNESS I KNOW THE MOVIE YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT! I can't remember the name but there was a girl who's mom always moved and they lived in New York and she didn't want to move but she did and she met that boy who liked her and he did the same thing and oh my goodness it had Hilary Duff in it and I know it I know it I know it!

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I give what's the movie!?!?! I just can't remember the name. Argh

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this is great! i like it..now i will have to go see the movie.

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this is cute! i really like it!

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omg. ron and baking...ok this good be good.

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WOW! I love how you ended this story. Its so good! Great Job!!! I look forward to other stories you write! 10/10

Author's Response: thank you!..check out some of my others!

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THIS IS GOOD!!! I'll read chp 6

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its so good i loved where you ended this chapter. keep writing. 10/10

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I like how you chose to write this chapter. In my opinion this story makes you want to read more! 9/10

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I really like this story so far! 9/10

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yea the movie is the "Perfect Man" I watched it when I was really little. I only remember parts of it including parts you included in your story. I really like how you used a movie idea and put it into your story. Great job!!! On to chapter 2. 8/10

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This was a huge ride from beginning to end...I liked how you ended it differently than what is expected, but it's still pleasing. This is such a sweet short story, and I thank you for writing it. FAVORITED. 10/10.

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Oh my goodness, this story is so sweet. You write it to match the story...sweet! Its so innocent and adorable, and it just makes me smile! Boy, I love it so much! 10/10. Great awesomely amazing job!

Author's Response: lol thankks.

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wow. i love.

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Sorry to much of a copyright on the Perfect man

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ok, totally drawing a blank on the name of the movie title, but I do remember it's got Hillary Duff and Heather Locklear! haha

Author's Response: yeahyeah. lol

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ok I'm guessing.that Hillary Duff movie.. that I forgot the name too.


Ok now my 'inner eye' has seen it all



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Ummm...shouldn't hermione have recognised Ron? Otherwise it sounds good though. I probably would've liked it better if there was this deep seeded history between Ron and Hermione and when Hermione got the letter all the feelings came back and she realised she did love Ron and then she went to go see him and he was kissing the blonde chick and is heartbroken all over again..etc,etc.

Author's Response: sounds like a good story! maybe you can write it? lol

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The Perfect Man, DUH. I love that movie and your story so far is pretty cool.

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Is the movie The Perfect Man? I like that movie.

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You just rewrote a movie. That's all. I'm sorry, but although you seem to be able to write well, this is exactly the same as the movie with a little magic added in!

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blatant plagerism...

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Are you serious? The Perfect Man, duh! ;) I mean, Hermione, bake cakes? Uhm...no. It's a cool idea though. But I just don't REALLY like the way you kind of copied the movie sort of completely. Then again, this is just the first chapter. I'll probably like it better next time ;)
Good luck ;)

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THE PERFECT MAN! the one with hilary duff! i am i right?
tell me if i'm right or wrong. send me a note on my deviantart account at ---> www.indiewikkan.deviantart.com
ps> i'm only half way through the chapter so if something else crops up i'll have to re-think!
btw, your fics really good

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I never saw the movie, but reading this I really want to watch it. It is good, and I really like it.

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