Wow... good story, good idea too. But I reckon the pensieve should have had the memory about the prophecy in there, that would have sent Ron and Hermione overboard. Report Review
Poor Harry, all his horrors were really under-appreciated. Just one thing though, it went from the third task to the battle at the ministry- nothing on Harry vs Umbridge? Nothing at all?
Brilliant story though *claps*
Maybe you could do a sequel which features Harry and Dumbledore in the Horcrux cave and then Dumbledores death?
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What a great story - I really love your writing and can't believe you took such a long break before writing your current one. You have a real knack for describing the relationship between the trio perfectly.Author's Response: Why thank you!
yeah, I really did get out of writing for a really long time, but recently, I've just wanted to start doing it again. Hopefully I'll get some good stuff out of it! :D Report Review
Just read this story, it's really good and well written. Report Review
Great story loved It! Report Review
Is this possibly the first and only chapter? I thought it would be many chapters with them seeing all of these things seperately, it would have been great. But this was still pretty good. ^_^Author's Response: Yea, this was it. This was just some little thing I made up for some challenge long long ago. Report Review
AWWW! Report Review
wow. that was awesome and a great idea. fave for sureAuthor's Response: thanks! Report Review
That was beautiful. If I were Hermione or Ron I would have done what they did. Report Review
heyy that was pretty good! i really enjoyed reading your fanficAuthor's Response: thanks very much Report Review
That made me cry! Aww... so sad! A definite 10Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
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