{reviewid: 2456818, reviewer: 'chickoftheblackroses'}
28th December 2010:
please continue this story i like it a lot
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I do try, but the chapters are so often rejected ;)
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{reviewid: 2420226, reviewer: 'Arielle.'}
4th October 2010:
Wasn't that a little bit too fast? Wasn't there a really close friendship before the sex?
On the other hand, it was written nicely. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D
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{reviewid: 2420167, reviewer: 'MrsMalfoy98'}
4th October 2010:
OMG i luv it she has to tell Draco everyone loves when he gets all anger
Author's Response: I liked that scene too (: Thanks for the revieww!
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{reviewid: 2413753, reviewer: 'Malfoylover01'}
18th September 2010:
it like all they do in school is sleep 2 gether but a good story so far lol :P :P xx
Author's Response: Hahaha yepp, this story is just something cuz I'm bored ;D
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{reviewid: 2413680, reviewer: 'RelentlessReviewer'}
| Review #5, by RelentlessReviewer | |
17th September 2010:
This chapter was a cliche built upon ten thousands of cliches. The dialogue was juvenile, the progression was too quick and choppy.
You have room for improvement. A lot of it.
Author's Response: Yep, the first chapter isn't very good. I hope you like the other ones, they're more developed. Thanks for reviewing though :)
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{reviewid: 2413641, reviewer: 'MrsMalfoy98'}
17th September 2010:
i loved it i was bored and just randomly picked one i dont think i could have picked a better one
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much. It really is you guys I wanna delight. Thanks!
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{reviewid: 2137350, reviewer: 'Diamondquills'}
8th June 2009:
Oh yeesh! Cliffie!! Please update very soon! =D
Author's Response: I will :) Thanks!
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{reviewid: 2137349, reviewer: 'Diamondquills'}
8th June 2009:
You know, I don't really like GW/HP but that scene was cute :)
Author's Response: Me neither, but I didn't want to make the story more complex...
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{reviewid: 2137348, reviewer: 'Diamondquills'}
8th June 2009:
Awww they're really cute! Loving it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review!
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{reviewid: 2137345, reviewer: 'Diamondquills'}
8th June 2009:
Ooh dear, Herms is in trouble now!
Author's Response: Haha yes she is! Thanks!
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{reviewid: 2137344, reviewer: 'Diamondquills'}
8th June 2009:
That was both sexy and funny- a combo I love. Great work!
Author's Response: Me too! *hi 5*
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{reviewid: 2137342, reviewer: 'Diamondquills'}
8th June 2009:
A little short but really enjoyable!
Author's Response: Thanks a LOT!
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{reviewid: 2130039, reviewer: 'hermyemma'}
31st May 2009:
Nice work.keep it up :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 2130037, reviewer: 'hermyemma'}
31st May 2009:
It was so funny when Draco bangs the door on Harry...poor Harry!
Author's Response: I'm glad...it was meant to be fnny
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{reviewid: 2130035, reviewer: 'hermyemma'}
31st May 2009:
Sounds cute to me, I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: YAYY glad to know!
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{reviewid: 2130032, reviewer: 'hermyemma'}
31st May 2009:
Oooh, I'm really loving this! But overall, could be better...
Author's Response: How exactly? Thanks for the review anyway!
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{reviewid: 2130031, reviewer: 'hermyemma'}
31st May 2009:
Update soon! Can't wait!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! =)
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{reviewid: 2130030, reviewer: 'hermyemma'}
31st May 2009:
Wow, pretty steamy! I like this!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1805036, reviewer: 'dracoismyhottie55'}
24th January 2008:
lol...poor dracoo...update soon!!
Author's Response: I will try! Thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1803986, reviewer: 'chica123'}
23rd January 2008:
yummy! i like this story, but i think it needs more discription... way more! i think the chapters need to be longer as well, and a little more suspense would make it PERFECT!
update soon!
Author's Response: Yeah, I really need to work a LOT harder on the story! Thanks so much for the review!
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{reviewid: 1731122, reviewer: 'phoebe'}
28th November 2007:
am looking forward to the next chaper :D
Author's Response: Thanks! I will update soon!
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{reviewid: 1699956, reviewer: 'casizzle21'}
5th November 2007:
Another intriguing chappie---just a suggestion...maybe add some more details to the story. just to make things interesting. :)
Author's Response: Yeah I was thinking alongt he same lines..things will spice up though. Thabks for the great review!
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{reviewid: 1699950, reviewer: 'casizzle21'}
5th November 2007:
interesing chappie...sounds like the story is getting interesing :P
Author's Response: You bet! =D
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{reviewid: 1699946, reviewer: 'casizzle21'}
5th November 2007:
interesting start...don't really know where it is coming from, but i guess i'll find out when i read on :)
Author's Response: You will...
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{reviewid: 1686514, reviewer: 'i_lov_lemers'}
| Review #25, by i_lov_lemers | |
27th October 2007:
who would have known what go's on at hogwarts when no one is looking!! lol
nice work, deffinetly keep writeing!
Author's Response: Ha ha, you are so right! I mean, they are teenagers with raging hormones right? Thanks for the grr8 review!
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