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Review #1, by my wicked quill Whenever you're ready

11th November 2009:
sweet, a soft and light little story, well worth reading

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Review #2, by searching17 Whenever you're ready

25th October 2008:
First off, I just want to comment on the story structure. The spaces between the paragraphs are so huge that it makes it really hard for the story to flow smoothly. And I think that you should break some of those frighteningly huge paragraphs up so that it's easier to read also. :]

The idea of the story was very good, but I do not exactly agree with the characterization. Knowing Ginny, she would have probably cursed Seamus for cheating on her then cried later on. Harry would never ever kiss Ginny after she found out that her boyfriend was cheating on her. And I doubt that Seamus would just "smirk" and continue kissing Lavender right in from of Ginny. If he wanted to end it, he would have, and Seamus is not evil, as far as I know.

The emotions that Ginny felt were nicely portrayed though, I just think this one-shot needs a bit more detail and work on its characterization. Overall, I give it a 7/10. I hope I helped you. :]

~Estrella

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments Estrella. I appreciate it. But I would like to point out that I wrote this at the tender age of eleven... Or perhaps twelve, and I am currently fourteen.
I wasn't trying for it to match characteristics. It was completely out of the young naive mind of an eleven year old that was bored one bland rainy evening.


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Review #3, by _alechia_ Whenever you're ready

2nd January 2007:
its cute but the massive gaps between paragraphs are really annoying, i just want to read it, not stare at a blank page :)

Author's Response: sorry. I would go fix it right now but I can't do ANYTHING on my stories untill the 7th but thanx for telling me its only like that because i copy pasted from microsoft word.

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Review #4, by onepound13 Whenever you're ready

1st January 2007:
A GREAT STORY!!! think about making it longer , please??

Author's Response: I'm sorry but I just wrote this as a spur of the moment kind of thing. I'm really glad that you liked it though.

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Review #5, by Aneres Whenever you're ready

31st December 2006:
Aww, that's a cute lil sweet fic.

Author's Response: Thank you!! :D

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Review #6, by ILoveLost18 Whenever you're ready

31st December 2006:
Hi! I like it. What will Ron say about Ginny and Harry together?? 10-10! *_* Happy News Years!

Author's Response: Happy be-lated New Years to you too!! I guess you're gonna have to use your imaginasion (sp?) to figure that one out!! I generally don't like Ginny/Harry but I just wrote that on spur of the moment.

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