Basicly, it's completely innaccurate.
They didn't find the house they built it!
Have you not read the books?
Honestly...Some people...Author's Response: thank you for your choice words of intelligent words. You are obviously someone of limited intelligence or you would not have failed to notice that the mention of Hogwarts school never comes into mention in this first chapter. The only house in this chapter is the house of Godric Gryffindor.
Well I just have one thing to say to you. Mirrors can't talk and lucky for you, they can't laugh! Report Review
lol what are u talking about!
in the review u left me you said that your grammer and story was horrible lol this is ten times better then anything i could hope to achieve. An excellent first chapter and your other story is good as well. I guess ill leave a review for that one too. =)Author's Response: Thanks! My grammer has certaily improved but in the other story of mine...well my grammer isn't perfect. lol. And I know it's a bit far fetched the whole Harry Hermione thing but I dunno...whatever works. Report Review
this is really, really good! i love the whole new founder called mr hogwarts thing. v original. love it :D
xxAuthor's Response: thanks! glad you enjoyed it but actually he's not the fifth founder but thanks for reviewing! So many people just don't take the time to! Report Review
Ooooh! Frederick Hogwarts! I like the twist! xxAuthor's Response: cheers!xx Report Review
Oooh, very good! Now get off bubble struggle and write some more!Author's Response: oh i was sooooo not on bubble struggle. yeah i was it's really fun!! but er cheers for the review... Report Review
Oh, this was very prettily written. The description, pace, tone and patience of the story radiated a natural calm in the reader and the length it was good too. It's a nice, promising opening chapter and looks like it has potential.Author's Response: wow you reviewed! thanks! made my day.xx Report Review
oh lo love it darling pleas epoet more and please review mine too! love you hun ur phoenixAuthor's Response: thanks. I'll review yours for u. if i haven't already.
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