Oh! This story is so funny. It was serious one moment, but very funny the next. I liked Petunia very much and the ending is hilarious!
The title is very cool! Report Review
Interesting story. I liked the bit about how Vernon was introduced into the story. Good job! Report Review
Loved it! I like the spin on Snape and Lily being friends. Report Review
Really kewl concept! I loved it! Report Review
Ha, ha...that was funny.I like that last paragraph there, especially the perfectly normal bit, which alll sorta came true; their neighbors and street and house were 'normal'...their child, on the other hand,..eh, not so much.
Nice story Zarathustra!Author's Response: Entmaiden, Thanks for the reviews - see, I'm an old softie at heart. The fight scene was very hard for me to write, I just do not do violence as I am a relatively non-violent sort, myself.
Glad you liked "Lemons" as well - did not know if I could do a one-shot, but this one pretty much wrote itself.
OMII is still in the writing stage - I like to have most of it written before I start uploading, and while I am already at chapter 15 in the rough draft, I have yet to send it through my Beta - Nathan. So, it still has a way to go before the uploads begin. So be patient, keep an eye out and it will eventually be there!
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Hmm, nice XD Report Review
beautiful story_ makes me pity aunt Petunia! Report Review
That is quite the funny story. Report Review
wonderful story! That last paragraph was really amusing. I quess being to normal just isnt normal. poor petunia. Report Review
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