Very detailed, very sweet. In my point of view, two of the most important things in a story. Also, the fact that I am obsessed with HG/RL fics add to the way I look at the story. *_* I also love the detail, wait, I mentioned that. But it's good enough to mention twice! I only try to be detailed with my stories but I continue to fail. Your story is a good example.

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DEW

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Aww this is a nice little piece. I like that you captured the feel of Christmas in it. Good work.

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nvr mind. i read ur summary. lol. -blue ^_^

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your story is really good! i like how you put so much detail into it. but, who is telling it? i have an idea, but it doesn't become a fact until the author saids so. lol. great job again!-blue

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awww this story is so sweet. I like it a lot ^_^. It's very descriptive and flows together perfectly. I'll go read your other story now, keep writing, you have serious talent, hun. I give this story a 10. xoxo- ciao Cissa

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thats really cool! im not supposed to take big pieces of acake either! im taking your advice on the descriptions. it was kinda my style to do more dialogue but change is always good i guess. your story is very interesting and i like the was you decribe everything. please write more to this story because i think it will turn out very well ( even though christmas is mostly over) thanks again for reviewing my story and ill continue to review your stories as well

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