Wow I really this this story x read it right through and couldn't stop !! Report Review
wow i cant believe i stayed with it through the entire thing. That was a great story, broke my heart a few times to read about Harry's hardships. But its always nice to have a happy ending. Thank you for writing it, its a wonderful story. And thank you for keeping pretty close to canon. Report Review
This story was wonderful. Don't get me wrong, it put me through hell.but it brought me back. This was a full circle kind of story and so worth the read. For my spare hours.Thanks Report Review
Wow!!! You had me hanging on the the edge of my seat. I want to read more, but I know how much it means when a reader reviews. Thanks for sharing this with me. It is a wonderful gift. Report Review
So far this is AMAZING!
The only thing I want is for Dudley and Sarah to get back into the picture. Report Review
Haha just figured something out, please don't think I'm a Star Wars geek or anything because I'm not, but this is what could've happened if Luke Skywalker gave in to the Emporer and Darth Vader to turn to the Dark Side. You know, Luke has one hand and everything. So yeah, it's wierd, but that's the way my mind works. Report Review
Just one word.Awesome!, just awesome Report Review
No why is it over how could you do that to me! Report Review
THIS IS SO GOOD, IT MADE ME CRY:') SORRY FOR THE CAPS MY LAPTOP IS SORT OF MAD AND RANDOM THINGS DONT WORK, LIKE THE CAPS LOCK BUTTON :( Report Review
This wasn't a bad story, but this could of never happened... Harry wasn't the Harry I knew from the books, neither was Ginny, Ron, Hermione, and most of the other characters. Report Review
i know this story has been done for awhile but i've just started reading it and wow. This is really well written and this chapter most definatly made my mouth drop open for a while. So to conclude things, i am enjoying this story and good job(: Report Review
A punch from the strongest man alive would not crush a human skull. Given that Harry is small and weak I doubt he could do more than slightly bruise Ron. Report Review
Honestly the best story I ever read. EVER!! Report Review
Well First Off I Want To Tell U I Posted Your Review On Your Review Of Someone Else's Story..Daa On My Part..And Secondly Your An Amazing Writer..I Keep Telling My Friend She Has To Read It..But She Said There Isn't Enough Draco In It LOL..Anyway Loved Normalcy And I Hope To Read Some More Stuff From You In The Future Report Review
This story was very well written and very engaging. The ending was wonderful. Report Review
Alright, I have to say this. Single most brilliant fanfic ever written. You could have done well with a Beta for some unintentional spelling and grammar typos but the writing, plot and the character building is absolutely exceptional.
I adore the way you handled Ginny. I am a huge fan of her from the books and was dissapointed with the way she was used in the last DH. But you made up for it. Kudos for the character of Sara. It added a new dimension to Dudley's character and I enjoyed the development.
All in all, fantastic. Report Review
Damn good read. I read through the last 20 chapters in one sitting! Report Review
Why is the format all stupid? Everytime it says harry's name they replace it with this stupid picture and who the hell are jack the ripper and irene adler?
Is there any way to change this?? Report Review
A lion; really? I guess I could see that; with him being the chosen one and all that. But with those kind of dimensions? That's utterly gigantic. So much for being kinda lanky with lean muscle mass... More like Arnold Swartzakitty. Note: More would have been done had Harry been that close to killing Ron. Stunning spells, or forcibly removing him from on top of Ron. Also: It's only his arm with that strength. At his shoulder he's still human so just because he has a lot of strength in his arm doesn't mean anything if the rest of his body can be moved. Think of it like this; Arthur has a hold of Harry with both hands and Harry attempts the punch. Because Arthur is holding on with both hands and bracing himself (He'd be in a very braced position feet splayed at shoulders width). Instead of killing Ron; Harry would be more likely to pick himself up off the floor while extending his arm for the punch. (Unless you're saying Arthur is incapable of holding Harry's weight.) Just a thought. Other than that well done! Report Review
And where was Hagrid during all this? Some rough edges, but overall an excellent chapter. Impressive how the excerpts from the book were incorporated. Report Review
Only thing about this wonderfully well written chapter that needs correcting in my opinion is Hagrid's reaction to seeing Harry devoid of his arm. Hagrid was very much out of character.
Other than that; well done! Report Review
I am absolutely blown away by this chapter. You have conjured together an absolutely wonderful work! I am throughly enjoying the humor within this chapter, simply marvelous! Oh; and really; the humor kills... I have stitches in my sides! This is my favorite chapter so far; I cannot describe how in awe I am. Very well done THANK YOU and BRAVO! :) Report Review
Bravo; simply put. Bravo.
I very much appreciate and commend the fact that they stopped and 'talked things over'. Taking it slow and realistic instead of 'jumping into the frying pan' as it were. Your work demands respect and I give it that. Your commitment to keeping true to the heart of the Harry Potter series is very evident. Thank you for this thus far very enjoyable work! Bravo! Report Review
Excellent Chapter! I am very much enjoying how much thought and effort you are putting into your chapters. I find it very refreshing how you tend to meander and don't speed through the plot! Very reminiscent of J.K.R's work! Thank you for taking your time while writing! It's all that more enjoyable. :) Report Review
Your part in here concerning growing up without parents couldn't be more accurate. I know from experience and you described it far better than I could have. Report Review
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