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7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Iceblonde Rain

14th July 2007:
awww...that was sweet ^_^

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Review #2, by angel007 Rain

16th December 2006:
It's good except there are too many "she"'s at the beginning.

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Review #3, by manya Rain

15th December 2006:
"Life is a life, live it." I like that. I like your story, very much! Well done. :)

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Review #4, by Salmalin'sdaughter Rain

15th December 2006:
Really cute idea!

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Review #5, by recklessabandon Rain

14th December 2006:
It's cute, with a good plot! but you might want to think about not using the word "she" quite so much because it makes it less interesting. Also, more adjectives would make it even better. For example instead of say "going to get mad" you could say "going to become enraged" Well, I like your story, keep up the good work :)

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Review #6, by onepound13 Rain

14th December 2006:
SO FLUFFY, in a good way.

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Review #7, by ILoveLost1888 Rain

14th December 2006:
I like it. 10-10! ^/^

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