awww...that was sweet ^_^ Report Review
It's good except there are too many "she"'s at the beginning. Report Review
"Life is a life, live it." I like that. I like your story, very much! Well done. :) Report Review
Really cute idea! Report Review
It's cute, with a good plot! but you might want to think about not using the word "she" quite so much because it makes it less interesting. Also, more adjectives would make it even better. For example instead of say "going to get mad" you could say "going to become enraged" Well, I like your story, keep up the good work :) Report Review
SO FLUFFY, in a good way. Report Review
I like it. 10-10! ^/^ Report Review
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