That was an amazing story.A little bit sad, a little bit scary. But at the same time amazing.Exalent Job! Report Review
i'm sorry this aint good..rework it please for your sake Report Review
Wow, this is great!Author's Response: Thanks. I finished everything, I sent in the last chapter and now I'm only waiting to send in the Epologue. Report Review
wow I'm damn curious. (that's what I always be over good stories) and I want you to update fast. It's not an order or something but a request. please:)Author's Response: Haha, yeah I'm getting down to the last chapters. Report Review
wow a pretty mysterious chapter. loved it and please update fast. i desperately want to know about Hermoine's picture and everything. I just can't wait,lol. loved your story till here. you portrayed all the characters really well and Dumbledore was as calm as we'd expect him to be.
10/10Author's Response: thanks! I'm just waiting for the next chapter to be validated, it's all set.
phew, you gave me enough of tension. just imagine if Voldemort would have captured them or something? but i am happy that Harry and Ron managed to help Ginny and Hermoine out from Voldy's clutches. though many people don't i like stories with a happy ending but i don't criticize those which don't have one:)
10/10Author's Response: lol thanks. But this ending just might surprise you. Report Review
i'm almost jumping with happiness that Hermoine and Ginny are alive. another wondrous chapter. well, if you want to read another fantabulous story check my favorites for Beyond Bones. it's just as original as yours:) you'll enjoy it. your story's in my faves too:)
I'm being kicked off the PC so i'll have to continue afterwards:(Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, i'll check that out definitely. Report Review
Urgh, sorry i posted a review twice by mistake. you can report it to the validators so that they'll remove it:)
ooh, the mysteries are increasing. i honestly can't endure so much of curiousity!!:) Report Review
oh lol, this chapter reduced me to tears. so many of the people dead and how could Dumbledore be so calm?
Gosh, i'm loving it/ living it! hehe.
i love your story.
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oh this chapter reduced me to tears. so many of the people dead and how could Dumbledore be so calm?
Gosh, i'm loving it/ living it! heheAuthor's Response: Thanks! Don't worry, keep reading, it'll get better. Report Review
another fatabulous chapter, seems like i'm reading a book written by JKR. she's so perfect and so are you:)Author's Response: Wow, that's a really big compliment. Thank you!! Report Review
well, I don't think Hermoine will start crying in the clutches of Voldy. she's a brave girl. MALFOY,MILLICENT,DEAN,SEAMUS!! I wanna kill them!! and then trying to eat Hermoine!! grrr.
anyways, wow fantabulous and realistic chapter. I would expect nothing good from Malfoy. ooh, i'm curious about the mysterious sound. going off to the next chapter.
perfect grammar and spelling:)
10/10Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, the mysterious sound, you'll find out about in the last chapters. Report Review
well, snape's a bit Ooc, he is a bit, you know, nice? but i like hm that way:) ooh, i'm damn excited and curious. Author's Response: I know he is, but I love Snape for some reason. I hate writing about him being the bad guy! Report Review
OMG I love this!!! Author's Response: Thank you!! The beginning is kinda slow but it will pick up :) Report Review
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