Reading Reviews for Walking In The Air
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Review #1, by harrypottersangel Walking In The Air

25th December 2006:
Sorry hun but it wasn't a wow-er. C/c--You could have definitely expanded on it and made it a ton longer. also there wasn't enough fluffy, romance-ness in it. Finally Walking in the Air doesn't really tie in with the story, I'm not quite sure how it fits. Maybe if you made it longer and more detailed it would help.
Don't take this c/c personally just remember it as you write your next fic and if you decide to, revise this one.
Much Christmas Love ~ K

Author's Response: thanx
ill bear it in mindo!!

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Review #2, by Rozie Rocks Walking In The Air

23rd December 2006:
Lol! Gr8 story but WAY 2 short! me want more! lol
happy xmas! =)
P.S. I agree, Ron IS a dimbat!!!

Author's Response: thanx finally some advice from you lol
merry christmas

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Review #3, by dreamseeker Walking In The Air

21st December 2006:
Ahhh, that was so sweet. And I'm being completely serious, that is seriously one of your best one shots ever. I love the last bit, "Of course you dim bat!!" Reminds me of me. Anyway, your writing has definately improved a lot (under my guidence, only kidding) and I absolutely loved this story. So thats about it.

Merry Christmas


Author's Response: Why thankyou very much dreamseeker
merry christmas everyone!!!

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Review #4, by DemetersChild Walking In The Air

20th December 2006:
Wow. Um. Interesting. Is that a song or something? Oh, and in the first sentence it should be wandered not wondered. =D

Author's Response: Thanx for the review! i'll change it straight away lol =D

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Review #5, by hellsangel_xx Walking In The Air

20th December 2006:
haha, the story kind of short and boring but i enjoyed the lyrics on the way. you could have made it longer and put more action in it.

Author's Response: thanx

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Review #6, by the_creator Walking In The Air

20th December 2006:

Author's Response: why thankyou

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