This gives me chills! Im hooked please keep writing this is mesmerizing!
I love this 'Mask' person idea! Why was Sirius staring at her?
You write really good! This is like reading a well written book! Update soon! Report Review
that was so good update update update and update i give it a 100 Report Review
i really like this story!
update soon please!!! Report Review
FINALLY YOU UPDATED!
This story is going to be REALLY good,
I can tell:D
Please update sooner
laurenn Report Review
Wow, this is great write some more!
pwease *gives puppy dog eyes* pwease Report Review
It's a shame you quit the story. The prologue is great and your writing style is beautifully wicked.Author's Response: aww, hearing u say that i 'quit the story' makes me feel sad. in a way, i suppose i did, but it just took me some free time, some encouragement to how good people thought this story was, and i have a new chapter coming out to you guys. It's been ages, and i had to re-red my chapter a few times, but in about 6 or so days the latest chapter will be out. a bit longer than the first, but still not all that long.
Thank you very much for supporting me, and i hope you enjoy the next chapter!! Report Review
I just wanted to tell you that all your story banners are absolutely gorgeous, and that I can't wait for the rest of this story. :D
PS: Did you stop writing your Oliver fics? Report Review
i really look foward to reading this story..
^_^ Report Review
This was a very catchy introduction, it definatelly makes me wonder on how Orianne's story will develop. Please update soon! Report Review
It seems like it's going to be a great story.
You write incredibly well, just thought you should know! Report Review
i like who this is going
please continue Report Review
I absolutely love your style. The way you describe everything and how you articulate is just great :) Please uptdate soon, I'm really interested about how it's gonna continue! Report Review
Very good so far. I love your style of writing... it reminds me a lot of my own, haha. Anyway, keep up the good work. I'll be keeping an eye on this story. Report Review
Ooohh, sounds good. Adding to favs. Update soon Report Review
I liked that prolouge. It was awfully depressing, but in a really good way because sometimes it's hard to write depressing parts in stories and not make it sound fake or cheezy, and you didn't do either! :) So, good job. I want to hear more of this story so I am going to add it to my favorites, but please, update often and soon! Report Review
I liked that prolouge. It was awfully depressing, but in a really good way because sometimes it's hard to write depressing parts in stories and not make it sound fake or cheezy, and you didn't do either! :) So, good job. I want to hear more of this story so I am going to add it to my favorites, but please, update often and soon!Author's Response: wow, thanks so much! lol, i find prologue's hard full stop. :P im doing the next chapter now ^_^ Report Review
That was a really great first chapter...i mean, nothing really happened lol, but it kinda showed how she thinks. You're a really good writer =]Author's Response: i always find first chapters hard, and then the second chapters coz u have to get into it, really.
thanks heaps!! Report Review
This is amazing.
I'm looking forward to reading more.
So, as all reviews say:
Update soon!!!Author's Response: thank you so much! im writing the new chapter now :D Report Review
Very eloquently written; I shall wait for updates veryveryvery impatiently. xDAuthor's Response: thank you! i'm currently in the process of writting a new chapter for this, it shouldn't take me too long. Report Review
yay im excited to read the restAuthor's Response: cool! thanks heaps for reading. Report Review
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