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1 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Tangey [THE NEW YEAR]

9th December 2006:
You should consider getting somebody to proofread this. Your grammar is incredibly poor. It does have potential though. I recommend you spend more time developing your characters, it will make a much more interesting story.

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