Aww that was so sweet!! I love this entire story line! 10/10!Author's Response: thank ya love :)! Report Review
Wow this was a fantastic story. I liked it a lot, it was very cutsy and hilarious!! Great job!Author's Response: thank ya darling :) Report Review
Its cute, but I think it ended too abruptly...we don't know what she did in the time between (how long was she even away for?) and if Ron really valued her friendship in the first place, surely he would have gone to find her the next morning or something...
I'm not slating it or anything, just think of it as constructive criticism.
Really liked the rant from Ron about all her annoying little habits...tho I think that possibly he should have kissed her during their argument...its more natural and provides a more heated setting & (I got the impression) that that's what their relationship was full of anyway...?
:)Author's Response: honestly
best review i've ever gotten
constructive criticism is exactly what i need so thanks a million times over
as for the crazyness of the story
i might rewrite it
i have trouble sticking to the plot of my storys and a thousand things can jumble about at once when i write things, it's one of my biggest struggles when i write, i get bored and stop writing and come back with different ideas and views
but im working on it
thank you for the review its much appreciated Report Review
9/10, this was adorable! And I loved it. The only thing I think could have made it better is: What happened to the rest of the crew? Did Ron just pack his bags and move to America? lol But other than that, this was really good.Author's Response: aww thanks, yea i didnt want to get into heavy details about everything, honestly i dont even know what happened :) i just wanted it to be about those two characters so yea thanks for the review, much appreciated :) Report Review
I thourghly enjoyed this fic.=] 10/10Author's Response: :D thank you! Report Review
OMG this is such a good story n these people r seriously crazy if they didnt review alreadyAuthor's Response: :) haha thanks, i'm sad no ones reviewed cause i actually really liked the out come of this one :) thanks for the support! Report Review
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