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3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by sbfam09 Chapters Two & Three

11th December 2006:
This is such a different take on the whole l/j story, and you do it well. The dialogue flows well, which is refreshing. I don't know about you, but it always seems to be a struggle for me to write clear dialogue. The only criticism I can think of is to be more descriptive. While your chapters are filled with conversation, it's hard to picture the scenes; otherwise, excellent! I'll look for your updates =]. -Adrian

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Review #2, by siriuslyobssesed Prologue & Chapter One

3rd December 2006:
o, poor james. i do like your story though, even if the beginning was slightly sad. update soon!

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Review #3, by imperfectionist Prologue & Chapter One

3rd December 2006:
is she stupid??...interesting story though...good job ^^

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