Reading Reviews for The Heart of the Betrayed
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Review #1, by hallowed_writer Letting Go & Epilogue

31st August 2007:
Absolutely brilliant story; very detailed and cleverly thought out. Well done for creating atmosphere, which I find pretty hard when its of death and darkness.
Very sad! Almost crying at the end. Poor man.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm quite happy with how this story turned out but I'm struggling with the sequel. I think I'm trying to put too much into it and making it overly complicated... Thanks again for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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