i was waiting for you to write another one-shot! they're always excellent. i thought that you'd forgotten all about this site or something. this one was very lovely, raw, emotion filled. it was beautiful. i liked the detail and descriptions. hermione's character seemed perfectly in sync. good work.Author's Response: Yeah, I left for a while, I just couldn't come up with any more ideas but just recently I was re-reading the fifth book and got a bunch of new ideas so, I came back! I missed all my wonderful readers. Anyways, thank you so much! I really appreciate you compliments, your reviews always make me smile :] Report Review
Poor Hermione. Jess, this was excellent. I particularly liked the part where you described the fact that the students could have let anything drop in casual conversation, information that Draco could have passed on to his higher ups. I thought that this line: She darted towards it, noting in the back of her head that it was a perfectly acceptable time to break the rules and enter, whether or not there was anyone inside. was an excellent way to describe Hermione.
I'm glad to see you posting again!Author's Response: Ahhh, thank you so much. This isn't one of my best but, I've just started back up again and I just had to get something out there. I've actually written up a couple others now but they're taking forever to validate! Again, thank you so much, I'm glad I still have fans here :] *tear* Lol. Report Review
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