I like this one although its kinda depressing...but I hope you write more on this.I think it could go somewhere and just so you know I would love to see something like it was hermione that had killed draco because she had never loved him I don't know it was just a thought or you could do something like she was pregnent and he tryed to get rid of her and the baby... also just a thought...anyways I would love to see any of those idea's posted into a ff...l8r Report Review
Suspense well it's good and a tiny bit rushed. need to make it more sunspence-y likw i give it a 8/10 Report Review
its good Report Review
looks interesting can't wait untill you update make it longer Report Review
one word "wow" keep it comming Report Review
I like it so far, very dramatic. It seems a little bit out of character for Draco to be crying and what not, I'd imagine he'd get more mad than cry...but then again if he truly was madly in love with Hermione, who knows? I look forward to reading more of this story to see what exactly is happening! Report Review
its pretty good =] Report Review
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