So... I may have just been fooled. Oddly enough, every story I read today had Hermione's name changes... Whoops. I feel a bit foolish now. I am so sorry for those reviews, it just so happened to be while reading those chapters that it must have kicked in. My apologies and don't worry, I'll continue reading the story :) Report Review
Seriously, you continued to use that long winded name for Hermione? If that continues, there's no way I can continue reading this. I'm sorry, but it it REALLY detrimental to the story. It makes it so difficult to pay attention when there's that completely unnecessary repetition. Again, it was cute at first but now it's seriously annoying. Too bad, because I think the story itself is clever and original. Report Review
Okay, so the whole "Hermyi.. Hermon... bloody hell, why didn't they call you something simple, like Janet" thing was cute and funny in the beginning, but it got really old and annoying, really fast. It also hindered the flow of the story, in my opinion. It was really difficult to read the story when that was repeated over and over. My suggestion would be to stop using it once they leave the pub, or in the morning (when they're no longer intoxicated.)
Other than that, good chapter. :) Report Review
haha, this seems like it will be really good. Report Review
I love this story! I love how you didn't make Ron a bad guy. In all the other fanfics I've read where Hermione isn't with Ron he cheated on her or something terrible like that. And this story is so original! Fremione is my OTP. 100% I noticed a few spelling errors but that's all, your grammar is good. Report Review
The initials for this story is hilarious. LAID. haha. Good story I love Fremiones.Author's Response: The acronym was actually a happy coincidence :)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for letting me know. :) Report Review
Wow. Just wow. You are a BRILLIANT writer! I have never read that good of a Fred/Hermione story. I could not stop reading your story ! Very nicely thought out and written! You are very good at writing :)Author's Response: I'm blushing! Thank you for such a nice review :) I really appreciate it! Report Review
I really really loved this! My favorite character was Magaret. She was the best and funniest character ever. My favorite parts of this was when George asks "Brother where art thou," when Margaret thinks Fred is thinking about something kinky and Hermione agrees upon the look unknowingly, and when the priest started off the "Mawage. Mawage is what bwings..." bit. I laughed my butt off and nearly did three spit takes. This is my favorite fan-fic everAuthor's Response: I am beyond flattered! Thank you so much! :)
I kind of based Margaret (very slightly) off of myself.
Either way, I really am honored to get such a wonderful review. Thanks so much! And thank you for reading!!! Report Review
Amazing absolutely brilliant
:)Author's Response: Aww thank you! I am so glad you liked it!
I really appreciate your review. :) Report Review
An amazing story! Is there a sequel?? If not, I would love to see one! Hey, guess what? Hermione and Fred's child, Tanner, is born on my birthday! I will be turning 15 on February 24th, 2013:)Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed reading it! :)Unfortunately, there isn't a sequel since I thought I ended it at a nice place.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I truly appreciate it. :) Report Review
I think you might have confused the name of the house elf, in this chapter, you started with winky than went back to tinky. It didn't make a difference, just slightly confusing. But other than that great story so far!Author's Response: I had a typo, but thanks so much for catching it! I'll be sure to fix it as soon as possible!
Thanks for the lovely review! I really appreciate it. :) Report Review
Oh. My. Goodness! That was by far the best fanfiction I have EVER read. I just love Hermione/FredorGeorge pairings. Now, usually, I don't like it when Fred is the one she ends up with, because he dies, but here, it just fit SOOO perfectly! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING THIS STORY!!!
P.S. Please, if you ever write another fanfiction about Hermione and Fred, or Hermione and George, inform me immediately. Thanks!Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I had so much fun writing this. :)
Unfortunately, I don't think I'll be writing another Hermione/Weasley Twin story anytime soon. But if I do, I'll try my best to let you know!
Thanks so much for reviewing. I truly appreciate it! Report Review
Okay. This is a pretty good story and I like where you are going with it. Although, they don't really sound like the actual characters all that much. And I know you said not to be offended by the "county hick" statement, but what if I called you a dumbass yankee with a horrid accent to match your attitude? I don't mean anything by it...
I don't actually think that of anyone living up north but it does still offend me that people believe that anyone down south is a hillbilly.
I can tell that so far you are getting the hang of it and I'm enjoying it. :)
7/10!Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.
I have a few things to say, just as a general response. I wrote this four or five years ago, as a teenager, and intended it not to be taken seriously for the most part. It's true, my characters don't exactly sound like JK Rowling's characters, but that is the beauty of fiction. Plus, at that time in my life, writing accurately was not my foremost thought.
Also, I never stated in any way that this so-called "country hick" comment was directed to southerners. That was a conclusion you had jumped to. Personally, I believe southerners are polite and friendly, and frankly, I love how they speak. The term "country hick" doesn't make me think of southerners, but in fact people in general who live in the countryside and have poor grammar. It is not something I delineate by region. I know this isn't a p.c. (politically correct) term, and I truly do apologise if I offended anyone.
Also, you're explanation of a "yank" has me thinking of Long Island, New York, a small fraction of the Northeastern United States, where there are some very distinctive accents.
Regardless of my locality in the world, I realise, in truth, my poor judgement and lack of forsight in choosing to describe anything in what could be considered an undesirable way. Hopefully, it doesn't appear in any of my other works.
Thanks for being honest and giving me constructive crit! :) Report Review
Best story ever! And, heyy, haha, my birthday is June 17th, too! How cool!Author's Response: Aw, thanks. :)
I had a wonderful time writing this way back when. Report Review
Amazing story! So much detail and an interesting plot!!
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I LOVE IT.
i don't think i'll ever get tired of saying that for your story.
Love the quotes as always.
And the thing that i like most is u keep the reader captivated by keeping us in the loop. Very few authors talk to the reader during the story...u do. And i just love it.
:)Author's Response: You're still loving it!? That's wonderful. :)
And thanks so much! It's wonderful hearing how much readers enjoy something I've written! :)
I LOVE it..
specially the double dialouges... the same lines twice over for both fred and hermione.
and ya, the telletubies family...
BTW, it was Tinky earlier and Winky now... disparity.
All in all, too good. :)Author's Response: I am so glad you love it! I had a wonderful time writing this story. It's so fun and flirty and refreshing. I also really loved writing in this style. :)
Haha thanks for noting the Teletubbies reference! And thanks for mentioning the disparity in the characters. I knew it existed, I just could remember what chapter it was in!
To conclude, thanks so much for taking the time to review! I really appreciate it. :) Report Review
I'm just commenting as i go along,
the first two lines remind me of Spring Awakening the musical.
We're Totally Fucked & Bitch of the Living.Author's Response: That's because I was listening non-stop to Spring Awakening while I was writing this and those are two of my favourite songs. :)
You have the names of your house-elf mixed up.
You called it Winky when it's name was Tinky.
unless there are two of them in that case i missed something.
But, I LOVE YOUR STORY.Author's Response: I'm so glad you love it!
And, yes, I did mix up the house elf names. Oops! Report Review
"In a spectacular red, it read ‘I Will Light Up the Sky for You Hermione. Love Always, Fred.’"
Aw Thats so cute ♥Author's Response: So glad you like it! Report Review
This is wonderfully written, though I stayed up later than I ought to have to read it...I have a plane to catch tomorrow! Anyway, this really brought my mood up, and I loved the story. I also enjoy a good FreMione. Thank you for a great story,
-BootsAuthor's Response: I'm absolutely thrilled to hear that you loved "L:AID!" I had a great time writing it, so hearing that someone had a wonderful time reading it makes it all worth it!
Thanks so much for the review and staying up later than you ought've. :P Report Review
I really love this story, and I'm actually re-reading it.. I can't remember much, so it's cool.
By the way.. What is the Glorious Googlie?Author's Response: I'm thrilled you love it! And re-reading? Excellent!
Umm...I don't remember what exactly a "Glorious Googlie" is. For some reason, I want to say that I never actually made up what it was...so yeah. It's up to you!
Thanks so much for your review. I really appreciate it! Report Review
Im super confused cuz fred just said that makes ten and u only named seven but awesome story by the wayAuthor's Response: I'm sorry about the confusion. Ron and Hermione only have seven (soon to be eight) children and so the total number of the Fred and Hermione Weasley clan comes to be ten.
However, I am glad that you liked the story! I really appreciate your review! Report Review
this is my most fav story ever. will read sequel now!Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! And the fact that it's your favourite story is a nice thing to hear. :)
Thanks so much for your review. I really appreciate it! Report Review
Hi, I loved reading this story:) keeo writingAuthor's Response: I'm so glad you enjoy reading this story. Thanks so much for your review! Report Review
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