poor hermione had to suffer from malfoy and shame on him being a horrible man...i really hate draco in your story... Report Review
Georgia! *hugs* I'll have you know that I was hoping - until the very end - that he would change. You know, I'm a Dramioine shipper until the bitter end. And the way you interwove her thoughts throughout the memories was so very haunting. And this sounds cliche and odd to say, but this story was literally hate and betrayal, written on paper. You are such a fantastic writer and I am favoriting this now ^_^. Fantastic, raw, amazing writing. I hope you are having a lovely day! xoxo Report Review
Wow. I can see Draco betraying Hermione like this. He was in character the whole time. Most Dramione stories make him the good guy but it's more likely he would do this. Great story. ;)
10/10Author's Response: Thank you! I actually loved writing this, so it's nice to hear such lovely compliments :) Yes, I was going to go for a happy ending, but it didn't seem very realistic. Thank you for reading and reviewing, I'm so glad you liked the story! Report Review
I think I'll go slit my wrists now.
Jesus! Malfoy's an evil so-and-so in this aint he?
Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.
xxAuthor's Response: *squee* THANK YOU! I think this made my day :D Yes, Malfoy is an evil sod but, in this, I can see why Hermione fell for him. He's charming and charismatic and a great manipulator. Anyway, thanks again, I'm glad you liked it :3 Report Review
OMG!! Cried and cried!! Hermione :'( andd Malfooy :@ :@.
XXAuthor's Response: Thank you :) Glad you liked it, I know it's sad but hey, all part of the story... :3 Report Review
Well, that was...morbid. It did it's job, I must say...angsty and all.
kbavAuthor's Response: Haha, thank you, that what I was aiming for :) Report Review
ok im dying for a sequel
i dont know why but this one just sorda grew on me (lol)
10/10Author's Response: Haha, thanks, but what would I write about?? My protagonist is dead :3 Report Review
That was awesome.
I love that song, so bad!
That was brilliant!
Please write more like this soon...
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) It really was a great experience writing this story, I enjoyed it, so I'm really glad you like it! Report Review
Awww, Sooo mean! I feel so bad!Author's Response: Yeah, Draco is a bit of a prat in his... Report Review
i usually don't like the angst-ish stories but this was very good.Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad you like it =] Report Review
Great job! I really like your stories! You're a fantastic writer!Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you do! Report Review
*choke* goddamnit Draco!
harsh truth..Author's Response: Yep, it was bound to happen (in my mind at least)... Report Review
-Draco was COMPLETELY in character there: complete daddy's puppet prat!
-Hermione was in/out of character: she ALWAYS has to prove a point, but she fell for Draco, something she wouldn't normally do...
~Daniele~Author's Response: Too true, but if she didn't, there wouldn't be a story =] Also, Hermione seems very forgiving character so I'd suspect if Draco chose to join the right side... I don't know. She'd be more accepting than other charaters...
Anyway, thanks for the review, you got me thinking =] Report Review
wow that was simple ahhmazing! :) ur a great writer, i was about to cry, i felt so bad...:(((, but good job :))!Author's Response: Thanks so so much! I'm glad I got a reaction, thats what I wanted :) Report Review
Ooh that was quite intense! But divine nonetheless. You have a certain beauty in your use of language.. the imagery is evocative without being overly poetic or flowery. It makes your story far more powerful, it's raw and I like it.
xox KylieAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! I can't stand it when stories go over and over details which is why I don't write like that, but raw? That sounds very powerful, thanks so much :D Report Review
One word: Perfect!Author's Response: Thanks so much :D Report Review
this was so evil. :(Author's Response: Haha, thanks? Report Review
I almost cried. seriously.
wow, I can't believe he actually killed her.
You're an amazing writer :-]Author's Response: Aw, don't be sad, she's better off without him, he's only concerned with himself. Thanks so much for reading and the compliments :D Report Review
woah that was massively creepy and sad! Great job!:DAuthor's Response: Thanks very much, thats what I was aiming for :) Report Review
just an amazing story! I couldn't stop reading it... I think you captured Malfoy brilliantly evil... please write more!...Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you liked my Malfoy :) Report Review
Wow... very good and very cold. For someone who's forte is humor, you are still a very convincing writer of "serious drama and angst." Loved it.Author's Response: Haha, thank you :) Glad you like it... Report Review
NOOO! Betrayed! Manipulated! In denial! Well he is in denial anyway. Whah. This made me cry. I hope you're happy. That was clever of you, the plot, Draco pretending the whole time. But was he really pretending? :O To be or not to be? Wait, don't bring in Shakespeare!
-Whacks self for being a twat- I wish they had found Hermione. It's funny, every fiction I read always turns out with Hermione dead. D:
Well hurrah for a great fic! -Pats you on back-
If you have time, you might want to check my first chappie out, and give me critisicms (sp?) :D -Coughs suggestively-
Lolol! Well done basically!
~ZazuliAuthor's Response: Aww, thanks! I'll try to get around to is ASAP! Thanks for the fab review! I wish I could write more, but I'm afraid I'll get repetitive :S Report Review
This story is kind of creepy. I did not know that someone could write like this. I wish that there was more to read on. Author's Response: Wow, thank you! It means a lot! Report Review
Wow. I liked it. 10/10Author's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
OMG; loved that! Pretty Girl has always had the best lyrics. I loved how you used them. This was so great!Author's Response: Prtty Girl has great lyrics, it is a great song :) I am glad you like my story and were nice enough to review! Report Review
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