{reviewid: 1840797, reviewer: 'australia_kelpie'}
22nd February 2008:
I love the story and keep it up! Cheers!
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{reviewid: 1558589, reviewer: 'Brooklyn'}
6th August 2007:
i love it!! update soon, plz!!
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{reviewid: 1454810, reviewer: 'Winni3'}
9th June 2007:
Wow :O
Brilliant story, please update soon!
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{reviewid: 1411807, reviewer: 'asian'}
9th May 2007:
Awesome story!!! I love it! Please update soon!
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{reviewid: 1411200, reviewer: 'Regulus_Black'}
9th May 2007:
omg please update soon, love this story
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{reviewid: 1376276, reviewer: 'hillo09'}
12th April 2007:
I love this story!
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{reviewid: 1372819, reviewer: 'CherryCheeks91'}
10th April 2007:
This by far is one of my favourite chapters. There's so much passion in the dance... My god. I just get a real good image in my head and I especially love who Sirius describes it as 'Sex on Hardwood'.
Well done,
-Cherry
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{reviewid: 1372745, reviewer: 'CherryCheeks91'}
10th April 2007:
Hey. I was wondering if ya wanted me to make you a banner for your story?? If ya do just email me at just_peachy_31@hotmail.com
Loved this chapter, update soon!
-Cherry
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{reviewid: 1372550, reviewer: 'caryjanecarter'}
9th April 2007:
that's so sweet, what you're doing for your cousin. I hope she handles this the best way she can, and lives her life with a lotta joy and a little love.
Oh, and good story, too.
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{reviewid: 1371740, reviewer: 'hp4eva786'}
9th April 2007:
can dumbledore really do something to peter. i mean you cant judge someone by something they havnt done ... yet, anyways great chapter update soon
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{reviewid: 1371733, reviewer: 'hp4eva786'}
9th April 2007:
i liked the chapter it was good. i also like how the friendship is devolping between kitty and sirius
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{reviewid: 1354220, reviewer: 'hp4eva786'}
25th March 2007:
loved their dance and of course the chapter
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{reviewid: 1354212, reviewer: 'hp4eva786'}
25th March 2007:
i like the tango
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{reviewid: 1354205, reviewer: 'hp4eva786'}
25th March 2007:
now this is the story line i want.
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{reviewid: 1354201, reviewer: 'hp4eva786'}
25th March 2007:
its cool. i like this chapter
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{reviewid: 1354189, reviewer: 'hp4eva786'}
25th March 2007:
arent they nice. too bad things like that dont happen in normal life. cool chapter
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{reviewid: 1350784, reviewer: 'MoonlitTwilight'}
22nd March 2007:
Geez...
That was disturbing (in a good way!).
I liked it. Update soon please!
Moony
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{reviewid: 1338415, reviewer: 'Angel_Pheonix'}
12th March 2007:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!
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{reviewid: 1324109, reviewer: 'loved%20up%20zombie'}
28th February 2007:
Kitty is well cool..
is her and sirius going to get together as they have alot of chemistry which adds flavor to the story so write more so i can find out if they do =D
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{reviewid: 1309334, reviewer: 'addicted%20to%20potter'}
17th February 2007:
I really hope you continue this story and update soon!!! I love this story!
addicted
;)
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{reviewid: 1305449, reviewer: 'Broken'}
13th February 2007:
Great job once again, please update soon!
.:Broken:.
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{reviewid: 1305016, reviewer: 'Innocences%20Shadow'}
13th February 2007:
Nice chapter but in the middle it was a bit cheesy but some bits were quite cool
Nya
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{reviewid: 1304537, reviewer: 'lothlorien'}
13th February 2007:
great chapter. i love it.
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{reviewid: 1304305, reviewer: 'StepUpx_Gryffindor'}
12th February 2007:
oh snap! the drama~! gah, i love it. she's like a little marauderette. =]
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{reviewid: 1304300, reviewer: 'StepUpx_Gryffindor'}
12th February 2007:
i like it, its just i think your rushing everything. if you want all that to happen in one chapter.. then i'd say that you should make the chapter longer...that would help alot. if you want help with editing, then im here for you too. i mean im not an expert but i guess i'm okay with my james/lily story now people tell me i write good, and im improving each time. =D
there's going to be good outcomes of this story, i know it!
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