Loved the chapter!but i just want to point out a spelling mistake that is well...Funny actually'Quickly digging out his wand, Harry did a non-verbal spell and the robes fell from Ginny’s flesh'
I love the story though and how you introduced back Mrs.Weasley.Creative.:)Author's Response: Oh thank you very much! Yes, my old stories will have multiple errors I'm sorry to say :( I was super confused when I first read this because I haven't gotten a review for HMY for a long time and automatically assumed it was for my latest story haha! Anyways glad you enjoyed it :) Report Review
Ha, I did come back and finish reading your story. I am glad I did, you finished strong and stuck to your plot idea.
Excellent job, thank you for taking the time to write this so I could read it. Good luck, hope you write more fan fics.
~HopelessAuthor's Response: Wow! Thanks for taking the time to read and review! :)
I will definitely be writing more fan fics in the very near future so keep an eye out ;) Report Review
I started reading this as a fluffy H/G story but finding a lot more angst and turmoil than I was looking for. As I am reading this, you've already finished your tale so I might as well too.
It's still a good strory, don't get me wrong.Author's Response: Haha thank you, I don't blame you for not finishing it! I wrote this in grade 7 I believe... definitely want to write some better pieces now. Report Review
Killing off Molly Weasley was like JKR killing off Hedwig! But it's your story...
I see quite a few more typo's in this chapter as well.Author's Response: RIP Hedwig Report Review
I love the story, hate double/triple spacing and a good time for a cliff hanger LOL
Good job, HopelessAuthor's Response: I swear everytime I post a story I make sure it has regular spacing! But when it turns out it has double/triple spacing like you said! And when I try and fix it, it happens again! Ah ! Report Review
I am amazed that no one went looking for Harry, but that's ok. He's back now. Another good chapter!
~HopelessAuthor's Response: Poor Harry :( Report Review
whoa -ok way too short of a chapter! I was just getting into it and it was over. Not sure about your Cally and Dave part, you really didn't give me much to go on LOL.
Thanks, HopelessAuthor's Response: Oh my goodness.. I wrote this about 5 years ago and looking back on it... wow. I remember writing that with this whole idea in my head and fitting them into the story, and them having gone to Hogwarts (that's why it said they eyed the Gryffindor symbol on Harry's robes) but deleted it and didn't know what to do with it! haha! Report Review
*sniff, sniff* grab the tissues! Nice start and well written. Chapter was a bit short, but you got across what had happened at your version of the battle.
I liked it very much. ~HopelessAuthor's Response: Ahhh my old stories .. yes, so short! Newer stuff, such as "Reality" will be coming soon! Longer stories :) Report Review
That was a really good story! Can't wait to read the 2nd chapter!
OneOfAKindAuthor's Response: haha thanks :) Report Review
you really dont like harry do you... omg! you're a death eater! =O haha im looking forward to reading the rest of this =DAuthor's Response: Ahaha Harry is amazing! =) Lol! Happy to hear you like it! Report Review
your a sad,sad man making mrs w dieAuthor's Response: A) I'm a WOman :)
B) Keep reading Report Review
totally awesome triogy!Author's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
Aww, I loved it so much.Author's Response: Woot! Report Review
I'm sooo glad that Harry is alive :DAuthor's Response: So am I. Otherwise he wouldn't be the Boy-Who-Lived!!! Report Review
:O You killed Harry!Author's Response: Hahahaha! That made me laugh :P Report Review
I do believe I have read something simmular.LOL. Really good ending, more freedom than Rolling, but she wasn't the romantic type was she now? Anyways, I am proud to put my last review for this story and congradualte you for a job well done. From Harry almost dieing to Mrs. Wealsely almost dieing and back you did a SUPERB job on this story! Thanks for the intertainment,
CommanderMattAuthor's Response: You read something similar? Really? Lol. If you ever know what story it is, tell me the name of it, because I would never take someone else's work, or ideas! =) Thanks so much for your awesome review :) Report Review
I have been very busy, so sorry for the late review. I'm glad that ron came around(I knew he would, how can u have a story without Ron?) Anyways, I absolutly loved it. Very emotional and well described. Your last chapter better be good...Author's Response: Late review? Pfft. No prob =) Thanks for the review, I love to get feedback about my stories, and it's great to know that you enjoy them =) Report Review
WHAT! you ve GOT to be joking. it can't be the last chapter, it;'s just go interesting, please try to tell us something else but NOT THAT. at least we need to see how harry potter generation grown up, well without voldmort, seriously we can never have that change well to JK Rolwings, but to you. so help us allAuthor's Response: Sorry to disappoint you, but that is the last chapter. The End. Finite. I'm sad too :( Lol
Thanks for reviewing! =) Report Review
*cries* AHHH! it's over :(. But it was realyyy great, definitely one of the best harry/ginny stories on the website.Author's Response: Thank you sooo much, but I highly doubt it's one of the best =)
If you like Harry/Ginny stories I do recommend you look on my 'favourite authors' page. Report Review
Yay! No! I don't know whether to be happy because I loved the ending, or to be sad because it ended. Awesome story! Keep up the brilliant work and hurry and wirte another story! Above and beyond a 10/10!
~CassieAuthor's Response: Thank you so much =) Yes, I'm sad too, but it had to end somewhere ... Lol. Report Review
Love the trilogy. Sad it's over. :'[. Good job! Author's Response: I know, I'm sad too =( Thanks for the review! Report Review
i love it kepp up with the good workAuthor's Response: Thank you very much :) Report Review
i am very tough on stories but i very enjoy this one
please hurry up with the next chapterAuthor's Response: I'll try, but I'm very busy!! =D Thanks! Report Review
I'm sad! But this chapter was really good, but still I'm sad that it's almost over! *cries*Author's Response: =Cries=
I'm so sad too. =(
Thanks so much!! Report Review
ak;sflksadfl;asldhf;alskdfhlkasjdfh !!! SQUE! (i wouldve made that longer but i dont want to stretch the page) -squeaks and splutters incoherently- I LOVE IT!!! omg that was so wonderful. I just reread pretty much the entire thing, since I'd fogotten how much i loved this story and now I'm just exploding with happiness. Perfect, perfect, perfect! Can I marry this story? Please? Pretty please? ...well even if i cant, I still love it and I will miss it SO much when its over. But I will reread it. Many times. Yes, I will. The only thing that i dont like is the banner, which made me cringe. Actually a lot of the banners i made a while ago that decorate your page are making me cringe. If they make you cringe too, I'd advise for you to go to TDA and rerequest at the Giant Eraser. -hint hint- kay, i'm sorry, it's just I've come so far since I made some of these banners that they're starting to hurt my eyes. Oh dear, I'm crazy. I wouldnt mind if you requested from someone else though, but if you want me to redo them, check it out at tda, its pretty cool. Okay, enough ranting on my part, and I'm going to go reread some more. You cant imagine how fuzzy I'm feeling rereading this :D definitely a million/10 :PAuthor's Response: Lol thanks so much Hed =) Been there alllllll the way for me =Grins=
NO! I ♥ my banners by you.
But if I write more, I will request your newer ones if it makes you happy xD I'd never ask anyone else to make them!!!!! Report Review
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