Awesome!!! Can't wait for next chapter!!! :) x Report Review
um, okay. weird, short, but okay. When did u last update. Report Review
really really good so far!!! keep writing , it seems really interesting, it makes you want to keep reading.
looking forward to the next chapter! Report Review
I think this story has great promise. Just update soon, and don't be afraid of length. Otherwise, it's very good writing and I can't wait to read more. 10/10 Report Review
this is good cant wait for chappie 2 please update soon Report Review
This is good and I know I just read the first chapter, but when are you going to update? I really want to read more!! Report Review
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Report Review
love it Report Review
lol cool i like it can't wait till the next chapter
10/10 Report Review
good i lke it it made me lauf
Despite orthography is good enough to keep me reading next chapter, hope you to update soon.Author's Response: what does orthopgraphy mean?
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