{reviewid: 2788639, reviewer: 'kimmee_08'}
24th May 2013:
Its beautiful..Thank you for writing this wonderful story.
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{reviewid: 2779313, reviewer: 'Anon'}
1st April 2013:
I'm enjoying the story but the use of "puppies" instead of "eyes" and "banana" instead of "wand" is starting to annoy me. I can't work out why they're there but it's completely ruining the story for me, so I've stopped reading. Sorry, I was enjoying the story a lot. You're a great writer
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{reviewid: 2779126, reviewer: 'Emmy'}
1st April 2013:
I was wondering why there are random words in the place of other words? This is the first chapter I noticed it in and it takes away from the story. Other than that, it is a fantastic read and I am so happy I found it!
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{reviewid: 2774232, reviewer: 'M.'}
5th March 2013:
I've read a lot of Dramione. I mean a lot. There are many in which Draco dies, but this one was so much more emotional. As I'm sitting here reading at school I can barely keep the tears from falling! You did such a fantastic job with the characters. You made them seem real, which is what makes us readers become so attached to them. Not only were your characters fantastic, but your plot line and imagery were phenomenal. Even the grammar was upro scratch! I am so impressed with this story. Absolutely brilliant.
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{reviewid: 2772512, reviewer: 'Chaserholly'}
24th February 2013:
Oh my.. Im still crying while writing this.. Although im really sad about the ending, but i have to admit you are a really good writer.. I dont usually cry over novels.. But you made me cry non stop.. Thanks for writing this awesome story!!
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{reviewid: 2770229, reviewer: 'LadyGrangerxoxo'}
12th February 2013:
I've read other Dramionie storys before, when one of the main characters dies. But they are all normally fast pacing.
I think your story really showed the emotion of losing someone and what they go through.
It was really sad that Draco ended up dying but your story still rocked! :)
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{reviewid: 2764084, reviewer: 'kristyhes'}
15th January 2013:
Only one word to describe this story: AMAZING!! This is the first dramione story that appealed to me in this way. There are no words to describe the way I feel right now so I'll just say thank you.. thank you cuz this story is a real master piece and the way you describe the emotions is so amazing that it was like I could feel every emotion in it.. and I have to tell you that I cried A LOT while reading it especially from the chapter where Draco died.. in fact I had to stop reading in berween each chapter to stop crying and my parents were watching me like I was crazy!! Lol.. anyway it was great and you're a wonderful writer so... keep it up and I hope that you'll write another success like that!!
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{reviewid: 2762054, reviewer: 'MrsHTX'}
5th January 2013:
Thanks for sharing a lovely, well-written story!
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{reviewid: 2758191, reviewer: 'Pinkylittlepig'}
12th December 2012:
I think you are an amazing writer, I really believe that you could publish books of your own someday! If you do, I'll be sure to read them! Thank you so much for having almost no grammatical errors; it drives me crazy when the errors take away from the content! By the end I was sobbing which is good because I was feeling so attached to the characters and the story that I was very emotional and I couldn't stop crying! I really like how you used something very unique and different from some overused dramione plot lines!
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{reviewid: 2752943, reviewer: 'accio_draco'}
16th November 2012:
that was a beautiful story! you have great potential as a writer. at first i was angry with you for killing off draco but now that its finished i think it was very bold of you to do that and although it was heartbreaking, it worked very well for your story..
one thing running through my mind is i imagine one day when their daughter realizes what shag means and asks hermione why her fathers tombstone says he was a prat and a great shag lol
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{reviewid: 2742587, reviewer: 'Cassie'}
27th September 2012:
This was fantastic. I didn't review any other chapter because I couldn't break from reading long enough to leave a review. I'm a blubbering mess myself. Draco's death... I just can't even. Wonderful job, really.
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{reviewid: 2726083, reviewer: 'anita'}
30th July 2012:
Everything was fine. I was coping from last chpt then you write things like this . “Do you think I should go tell Daddy?” and the tears streaming down my face as Coldplay would say lol but seriously I can't even get mad at you cause like you said it was hinted and this was so beautifully written :)
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{reviewid: 2726080, reviewer: 'anita'}
30th July 2012:
Since last chapter the tears just keep on coming. I giggled a bit at the headstone absolutely perfect
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{reviewid: 2725463, reviewer: 'A%20True%20Dreamer'}
28th July 2012:
My heart hurts already... I came to this story because of someones reaction on tumblr and now i fear i will spend the day crying...
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{reviewid: 2724863, reviewer: 'Lauraprescott'}
26th July 2012:
So many feels. I can't handle the death. Im a sobbing mess. Why? Why?!
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{reviewid: 2722291, reviewer: 'Ashley'}
18th July 2012:
I feel a bit late saying this, but this was amazing. It really was. After Draco died I could not for the life of me stop crying. It was just so emotional and deep and I loved every second of it. You are a fantastic writer.
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{reviewid: 2717749, reviewer: 'Unknown'}
9th July 2012:
This one is really great! I like the word choice,everything fits together perfectly! I think this one may be one of the best chapters you've written so far! I'm excited to read more! The suspense is heightening on "can I trust Draco Malfoy? "
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{reviewid: 2717744, reviewer: 'Unknown'}
9th July 2012:
Romantic! It's very... creative, amazing, I don't know how to describe it! Lets just say, it totally made me just want to read it again, and again, and again!
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{reviewid: 2675594, reviewer: 'mbruton'}
22nd March 2012:
very rare, a believable dramione, and you did amazing! I loved it, though i have to admit the ending made me cry, just a bit :)
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{reviewid: 2660076, reviewer: 'mskairijade'}
16th February 2012:
Beautiful story very well written
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{reviewid: 2633045, reviewer: 'Fidelius_Charm'}
23rd December 2011:
Okay, first of all this story is amazing! I love your writing style, and the way you added bits of humour into the saddest of chapters. Second of all, I've been crying non stop since chapter 30, I mean seriously I had tears streaming down my face. Congrats, it's been an amazing read :)
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{reviewid: 2628630, reviewer: 'Sydney'}
14th December 2011:
My ultimate favourite fanfiction ever. I'm crying so hard. So perfect.
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{reviewid: 2618885, reviewer: 'KateSelf21'}
21st November 2011:
Oh my goodness, i absolutely LOVED Runaway...it was so fascinatingly wonderful, it made me cry at times and at others I couldn't help but laugh, Thank you so very very much for sharing this story with the HPFF world, I know that everyone who has ever read this has enjoyed it as I have...I cried when Draco died...and I cried when Hermione announced her pregnancy, because your story is so loving and full of emotion... You did a fantastic job on this, and I congratulate you!
-Kateself21
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{reviewid: 2612781, reviewer: 'Alegria%20Ondevilla'}
| Review #24, by Alegria Ondevilla | Epilogue |
7th November 2011:
This story is really beautiful. :) You made me cry in the end! I always cry whenever I read that either one is dead. But really this is such a wonderful story, great job! ;)
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{reviewid: 2611087, reviewer: 'Lubi'}
3rd November 2011:
The chance definitely paid off - great chapter!
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