wow.. this was really good.. i was propper cryin from when Ginny died... my face is all puffy now! 10/10Author's Response: Wow, I didn't think it was that good, but, if you say so, I'm glad you loved it! Check out my other stories! I love it when people review! Report Review
oh no. they'll forever grieve for them and they wont move on. thats so terribly sad. nicely done though. you made me think that ginnys daughters might have a chance at moving on, then took it away from me. cruel. but good. well done. Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad you liked it!
I know, they will eventually get better, but over time, and they will still not forget.
I was aiming on it being like that! :P Glad it was!
Thanks for the review!
~Teresa Report Review
I really liked this story i thought ut was really good. It was also sad but i liked it. Great job!Author's Response: Thanks...Glad u liked it! I tried to put as much emotions as I could! Report Review
you'll probably win!Author's Response: Yayness! :P Report Review
Wow, I loved it! You had a lot of good litary things like "Big Blue" and other good things. I like how you discribed all of the people. It was good, but you may want to try to not use the "..." as much, but it's hard, believe me, I know!! Thanks for a great read.
Please read and review my stories
Author's Response: Thankies! For your review you get a white chocolate Reses! Now where did I put it.... *looks around* OH YEAH! I ate it! oops! :P
But I am glad u liked it! I know I use the "..." too much... It's hard not to....
(SEE! I'm doing it again! :P)
But thanks for the review! I'll check out your stories now! :P Report Review
OMG!!! What is this story about!!! Anyway its awsome! PLZ continue it!Author's Response: It's supposed to be a one-shot for a competition on Plotxbunny.
I am glad you like it, but I don't think I'll continue it... Seeing as it's a one-shot and I don't know how I could continue...
But glad you like it, again!
Check out my other stories! Report Review
Wow, onto my favourites :)
Okay, I loved your first and last paragraphs. I didn’t know what I had done to deserve this; I don’t remember anything at all, thanks to him. For he did this unto me… Cursing me with life when he chose death… He may have done it to save me… But he just condemned me to a lonely life without his love that I so desperately needed.
I laughed a bit at her antics. She never did like to be showed up, so much like me and her father.
I cried and realized Dad would never know his grandchildren; and they would never know him.
We would never recover from this...Time won’t heal all wounds...no matter how hard we try...We can never fully recover...They marked us...And then they left, leaving us here, lost and alone; even if we did have some family.
Wow, powerful. In between, it was a little fast paced and slightly rushed, but I can live with that! :P 9/10 and onto faves list :)Author's Response: Thankies! I do have problems with going to fast, that's why I am going to edit it soon, as soon as I get free time that it.
I tried to be as powerful as possible, putting emotion into the words, I was depressed when I wrote it, venting my sadness into my words. But glad you liked it! Report Review
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