{reviewid: 1921274, reviewer: 'XxescapingfatexX'}
12th May 2008:
you really should have more review for these last couple of chapters. this story really is great (: i can't wait to read the next chapter. 10/10 ^_^
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{reviewid: 1921270, reviewer: 'XxescapingfatexX'}
12th May 2008:
hey there :D i started reading this chapter literally 3 minutes before i had to run to the bus stop this morning, and i almost missed the bus because i wanted to read it :p all day in school all i was thinking about was coming home and finishing this story. (: that tells you how great i think this story is ;)
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{reviewid: 1920422, reviewer: 'XxescapingfatexX'}
11th May 2008:
oh. my. gosh. i can tell that i'm really going to love this story, and it's only the first chapter ;) chapter two, here i come :D
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{reviewid: 1900802, reviewer: 'noxo76'}
20th April 2008:
Intriguing! Bring on chapter 11.
Author's Response: Thank you, hun! I'm trying so hard. It'll be up as soon as I can make it sound right. Thank you!
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{reviewid: 1866329, reviewer: 'srdavis1'}
17th March 2008:
Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Yayh! Thanks, hun!
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{reviewid: 1859558, reviewer: 'Quiddichref'}
10th March 2008:
Sorry to say this story is just a little too dark for my taste. I'm not sure why, but I don't think the HP universe needs to be much darker than it already was by DH. Hopefully there is a light at the end of the tunnel on the way! :=)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, sweetheart. There is a lot of light coming around the corner, no worries. Probably starting in a couple of chapters, it's going to get a lot better. This story will have a happy ending. :) Thanks again for the review, loff!
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{reviewid: 1854241, reviewer: 'Altonvyr'}
5th March 2008:
Very creative way to do the catch-up sequence. Very nice.
I've had this story added to my favorites for a while, and I wait anxiously to see where this story is going to go - I love the style and the tone of the writing - PLEASE keep up the great work, and don't let this one go! :)
And this is my first review EVER!
Author's Response: Thank you! I thought that would help you guys. It sure helped me. I'm so glad that you like the style, because I've been trying to get one and this seems to work. I am not planning on letting this go until it's done; don't worry! Thanks for giving me the honor of your first review, and I hope you keep doing so in the future! Thanks so much!
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{reviewid: 1854132, reviewer: 'PotterGeek64'}
5th March 2008:
Yikes! This is getting pretty intense
Oh man, Harry and Ginny are DEAD?
and ron?
Hurry up and update!
Author's Response: :)
I will try my very hardest to get something out ASAP. Thanks for the review, sweetheart!
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{reviewid: 1851759, reviewer: 'lily_evans_is_my_hero'}
3rd March 2008:
Oh. No. You. Didn't. Just. Kill. Harry. And. Ginny.
Author's Response: All will be clear with the next chapter. (Which I just put up.) Thanks for the review, hun!
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{reviewid: 1815570, reviewer: 'PotterGeek64'}
2nd February 2008:
What? What?! WHAT?!
HARRY AND GINNY ARE DEAD!
Nope, I refuse to believe it. I think it was all a dream or - or - or SOMETHING! They CAN'T be dead!
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much, hun! I wish I could tell you what's going on! I'm glad you liked it! You rule!
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{reviewid: 1815501, reviewer: 'allthegoodonesweretaken'}
2nd February 2008:
Hey, I love your story and am following it enthusiastically. There are a few details in your story though that don't match up with England. First of all you don't get your licence until you're 18 in England, secondly milk comes in pints or litres, not gallons.
These are just details, and don't really harm your story. You should get a britishism-beta to look through it if you want to fix those details.
-atgowt
Author's Response: I thought I replied to this. Apparently not. But thanks so much! I fixed the details, thanks for pointing them out. Maybe I should, because I'm hopelessly American. Thanks again!
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{reviewid: 1760872, reviewer: 'Sahara%20Weasley'}
21st December 2007:
I can honestly say I have never given a 10 out of 10 until I read this story.
Please continue this!
Its been too long!
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{reviewid: 1718490, reviewer: 'ladi_bugg10101'}
20th November 2007:
So far so good. Im really enjoying this story and I camt wait for you to update! Though you did make one mistake. You mentioned in one chapter that Neville was a prisoner and in another that he was fighting with the order. Keep up the good work!
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{reviewid: 1683994, reviewer: 'ronsbiggestfan09'}
25th October 2007:
ahh!! please update soon!
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{reviewid: 1683971, reviewer: 'ronsbiggestfan09'}
25th October 2007:
I've had this favorited since Chapter One :] great story.
Author's Response: :) Thanks, hun! Glad you like!
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{reviewid: 1652280, reviewer: 'Lullabywitch'}
2nd October 2007:
That just can't be Ron! Can it? Do you have no mercy? And what was the part about Hermione being dead?
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{reviewid: 1645689, reviewer: 'Ginerva%20Potter'}
27th September 2007:
HOW DARE YOU LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT! AAARGH!any who, great story. loving it so far.
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{reviewid: 1645681, reviewer: 'Ginerva%20Potter'}
27th September 2007:
You kinda forget it's a dream though, which takes away from the story a bit, but it's Very good any ways. I love it!
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{reviewid: 1642411, reviewer: 'DelilahBlueEyes'}
24th September 2007:
...Wow... she hit him!
Author's Response: Ummmhmmm. ;) Thanks!
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{reviewid: 1636656, reviewer: 'ronandhermioneforevertogether'}
19th September 2007:
i'm on the edge of my seat! great story, please update soon i gotta know what happens next!
Author's Response: I will update ASAP! Thanks so much, hun, you rule!
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{reviewid: 1636130, reviewer: 'PotterGeek64'}
19th September 2007:
OH NO!!!
I am Trawleny (I can't spell - sorry)...I see a spell being shot at a slight red haired girl. A raven haired boy jumps in front of it...
DON'T MAKE ANYONE DIE! Unless it's like Voldemort or Bellatrix or something. But I really think that if Harry died, Ginny might kill her self or vice versa. And same with Ron and Harry.
Wait a minute! This is all a memory. That means that both Ron and Hermione live! YAYY! (Even if Ron's body and face is totally messed up) Anywho, excellent chapter and I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!
(hint hint, UPDATE SOON!)
10/10
Author's Response: Hey! I'm gonna tell ya right now, at least one of those predictions is wrong. I'm not all that cliche. Haha. And is it a memory? Is it Ron? Who knows, really... I will update soon; I'm starting to really enjoy this story again... :)
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{reviewid: 1635897, reviewer: 'Laurel14'}
18th September 2007:
NO.!MAN
Author's Response: Haha. Thanks.
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{reviewid: 1635726, reviewer: 'jkelly'}
18th September 2007:
Awesome!!!
Author's Response: YAYH, thanks!
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{reviewid: 1611944, reviewer: 'Aligiah'}
3rd September 2007:
I claim review 1-0-0!
I really do like your OC's. And I love how you wrote down the medical terms for the body parts and such. :]
I may have to read more later, right now I am pressed for time.
I promise that I will use my amazing secret spy tactic (stolen from Eboni_Black) to re-review this chapter soon!
Happy Memorial Day Kenzie!
Alex
Author's Response: YAYH!!!!! :jumps up and down like Percy in one of the books and throws confetti: Would you like some banana creme pie while you're here, Alex? I have one in the fridge. Seriously, I do. But anyways. You like my OC's?! That's crazy! I hate my OC's usually. Glad some people like 'em, though. You owe me two superspy tactics now, Alex! If you do re-review, I can't wait! Happy Memorial Day to you too! :hugs Alex and randomly squels 100:
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{reviewid: 1611858, reviewer: 'funny_lol'}
3rd September 2007:
OMG! This story rocks!
Author's Response: Thanks soo much, hun!
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