{reviewid: 2458645, reviewer: 'weasleywheezes'}
1st January 2011:
wow very descriptive i love it you should do more like this is erotic :)
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{reviewid: 1981784, reviewer: 'yarianadiaz'}
5th November 2008:
uhmm very intense ... that was very short and almost didnt have a point ... but i think that this could be a really great story if u ontinued it
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{reviewid: 1882262, reviewer: 'DracosOnceLover'}
31st March 2008:
Okay That is a really good story and i beg you to make a sequel...maybe with the consequenses of a child because i didn't see any protection in there lol. and maybe voldemort find out...i don't no just suggestions. great story!!!
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{reviewid: 1837809, reviewer: 'chinery13'}
20th February 2008:
that was a brilliant piece of writing and intimacy great work keep it up. 10/10
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{reviewid: 1768582, reviewer: 'Dru%20Dreams'}
28th December 2007:
That was a really good story!
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{reviewid: 1701782, reviewer: 'dracomalfoylover123'}
7th November 2007:
I liked it, but I think it should be a little longer and more detailed (I know you have been reviewed about this before but I hasten to add to it). I liked the sex scene but it would have been better of it wasn't so rushed and really explained things better, if you know what I mean. Anyway, Good luck with everything. Many thanks, Becky x
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{reviewid: 1616463, reviewer: 'hermyemma'}
6th September 2007:
That was just great! I dont know what to say!
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{reviewid: 1598510, reviewer: 'blackpearl_'}
26th August 2007:
The only thing I say about this is that it was too fast, and Ginny would normally say "I love you, Harry" not "thank you"
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{reviewid: 1431557, reviewer: 'hrh4ever'}
25th May 2007:
I am speachless... In a good way.
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{reviewid: 1426773, reviewer: 'kissedbyavampire'}
21st May 2007:
good depiction of how self-sorry harry is.
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{reviewid: 1326866, reviewer: 'ginny007'}
| Review #11, by ginny007 | Desire |
2nd March 2007:
I liked that story. I don't have any advice for you. Just keep writing more stories.
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{reviewid: 1251338, reviewer: 'beebsy1219'}
3rd January 2007:
OMG!
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{reviewid: 1240798, reviewer: 'wowgirl'}
25th December 2006:
wow! when's he going to meet the other girl? Writ more quick!
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{reviewid: 1207943, reviewer: 'Tilliexxxx'}
| Review #14, by Tilliexxxx | Desire |
26th November 2006:
No offence or anything, but I didn't like this story much; bit weird and went too fast.
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{reviewid: 1206636, reviewer: 'Ginny%20Rox%20the%20Burrow'}
25th November 2006:
Ooh.Saucy.lol.Very good;)*GRtB*
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{reviewid: 1205671, reviewer: 'british_born_and_bred'}
| Review #16, by british_born_and_bred | Desire |
24th November 2006:
That was really excellent, good descriptions, and very well articulated! Well done for a good piece of writing!
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{reviewid: 1205237, reviewer: 'Lil_Hler'}
| Review #17, by Lil_Hler | Desire |
23rd November 2006:
wow.that was REALLY good.
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{reviewid: 1199684, reviewer: 'citylightxx'}
| Review #18, by citylightxx | Desire |
18th November 2006:
WHOA! that was really good. and whoa. just whoa haha.
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{reviewid: 1199675, reviewer: 'Erised'}
18th November 2006:
Good plot line so far, but I'd try to work on my sex scenes a little if I were you. Just slow it down a little. Try to play it like a movie in your head before you write it, that's what helps me with my writing.
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{reviewid: 1199503, reviewer: 'stephanie74'}
18th November 2006:
oh, wow! (fans herself) - Very good one-shot! The whole scene well described, and I liked the wording. Why don't you try writing a companion piece from Ginny's POV? that would be nice.
;-)
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{reviewid: 1193209, reviewer: 'kit'}
12th November 2006:
it was pretty good
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{reviewid: 1193049, reviewer: 'katyjoy_777'}
12th November 2006:
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