I really want to find out what happens! Please write more!

 Report Review

That's pretty good. It's really funny because I have a story that I wrote that is sort of similar to yours. I just thought that was weird whatever they are really different too.
xoxo~Lex

Author's Response: thanks, and thats pretty cool

 Report Review

please there has to be more

Author's Response: There is going to be more. After the chapter to The Final BAttle as Told By: Jenny Anders is validated, I will write the next chapter..

 Report Review

Rushed, poorly written, and not a very good paragraph all together. Look, here's some advice:

you have great story plots, but they are poorly written. And ive seen some of you reviews and your responses, and you just want to hear the good things and shut out the bad things. You need to listen to everyone, because they only want to help. Try doing some exercises on the forum or soemthing, and really try to listen to better writers, which will only make you better. And maybe try reading some stories written by people like Timeturner, Violet Gryffindor, Stargazer, or other expirience writers. It will truly help you.

Good luck in your future

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice.

 Report Review

Iloveit!
More?


Author's Response: Thanks I will be continuing.

Chris

 Report Review

Good story keep it up

Author's Response: Thanks, I will.

Chris

 Report Review

I hope you update soon! I want to know if the secret is true!

Author's Response: I will be updating soon. Thanks for the review.

Chris~Magicguy93

 Report Review