7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by gummybear Hermione Finds Out

16th May 2009:
I really want to find out what happens! Please write more!

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Review #2, by Lolo_Lex_gryffindorgals Hermione Finds Out

3rd January 2008:
That's pretty good. It's really funny because I have a story that I wrote that is sort of similar to yours. I just thought that was weird whatever they are really different too.

Author's Response: thanks, and thats pretty cool

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Review #3, by mrsmolly Hermione Finds Out

11th August 2007:
please there has to be more

Author's Response: There is going to be more. After the chapter to The Final BAttle as Told By: Jenny Anders is validated, I will write the next chapter..

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Review #4, by tycoon34 Hermione Finds Out

4th August 2007:
Rushed, poorly written, and not a very good paragraph all together. Look, here's some advice:

you have great story plots, but they are poorly written. And ive seen some of you reviews and your responses, and you just want to hear the good things and shut out the bad things. You need to listen to everyone, because they only want to help. Try doing some exercises on the forum or soemthing, and really try to listen to better writers, which will only make you better. And maybe try reading some stories written by people like Timeturner, Violet Gryffindor, Stargazer, or other expirience writers. It will truly help you.

Good luck in your future

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice.

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Review #5, by forgottenxlovee Hermione Finds Out

27th July 2007:

Author's Response: Thanks I will be continuing.


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Review #6, by talon Hermione Finds Out

27th July 2007:
Good story keep it up

Author's Response: Thanks, I will.


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Review #7, by casey_and_kasey Hermione Finds Out

27th July 2007:
I hope you update soon! I want to know if the secret is true!

Author's Response: I will be updating soon. Thanks for the review.


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