waiting for more!!

Author's Response: I've been away for a fair bit *France* so I've been mentally writing the next chaptewr, I'll publish it asap

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This was good, but I'm a little confused. I still like it though, and I look forward to more Sirius-Lielabelle interaction. Write more soon!

Author's Response: oh yeah haha, yeah I've been away for a fair bit *France* so I've been mentally writing the next chaptewr, I'll publish it asap, I'm glad you enjoyed it

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This is a good start, I like this story so far. Keep it up!

Author's Response: ah thankyou, I hope it turns out well

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Great story! I almost forgot how good it was. Key word = Almost.

Author's Response: aw thank you, I'm glad you'r enjoying it, when I'm aloud to validate again I'll put in the next chapter ^_^

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Sounds good! Update soon :D

-CrimsonEmeralds

10/10++

Author's Response: I will thanks for veiwing ^_^

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I liked this. Its a great basis! Please dont abandon it! Please continue it and update soon!

~~~MOONY~~~

Author's Response: Okay I'll continue writing this and DG&HS

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hmm, this story has an interesting premise, but i'd be inclined to think that if she lived in the forest for all those years she'd be a lot more suspicious of people. also, punctuation might help a bit--just break up your paragraphs more, indent, that sort of thing. it's easier to read that way and it doesn't just look like one huge block of text. :) just a friendly suggestion. you might want to slow the action down a bit too...

Author's Response: true that is true but she also would probably want to be with people as well

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