Love it, all except for the fact that's over. :( Great story and great chapter. Report Review
Love this chapter! When I saw the A/N I was like "NO!" but then I realised that I could keep reading! Yay! Love it! Really great! Report Review
Love it. Perfect. So sweet. Report Review
Wow. Love it. It's really perfect. Report Review
Woah. Dramatic. Love it! Report Review
Harry and Blaise? 0_0 OMG! I can't believe it! Love the chapter! Report Review
Oh my gosh! Love this! I couldn't stop smiling, biting my lip, and saying "Oh my gosh!" while kicking my feet and giggling. It's so good! Report Review
y does it have bits of song or poem or whtevers in it? Report Review
Great.. Absolutely great! I think you got the idea?? Hehe.. :D Well I love this story and your writing in general.. You did have one mistake at one point.. YAY.. :D Hurra!! :D Okay.. Hehe.. It was just a typo.. Grrr.. you had written through instead of threw, but that's nothing.. Why? Hehe.. Oh well, I simply love your story!! Just love it!! :D I've even added you to my favourite author.. (and I only have three, sooo.. hehe).. :D Well.. This is just great!! :D Keep on all the good work.. PingoAuthor's Response: Aw, thanks so much! You're really sweet. You're reviews have put me in an incredibly good mood. And I have to say that I'm honored to be on your Favorite Authors list. :D Thanks so much! Chapter 5 of Deluded Fairy Tale up ASAP! Cara Nicole Luvitz Report Review
Couldn't resist.. Just a small comment though.. Aw.. So sad.! Poor Draco.. Still love the story.. Report Review
I love it.. Going to read more and come back with a nice long review for chapter 7.. No reviews in between.. I just want to read!! Take that as a compliment! :D hehe.. Report Review
Love it! So cute! Ronald is a meanie face! Awesome!Author's Response: So glad you liked it!!!! I was worried that Ron would seem too out of character, but I guess I didn't do as terrible a job as I thought did. :D Thanks for the review! Cara Nicole Luvitz Report Review
Ouch.. This story actually kinda hurts to read :( It reminds me of my ex in a way.. but it's also so completely different and real.. besides the lyrics, I really like this story Report Review
im so sad that this story is finished you write really well and have great imagination :)Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really, really glad you liked it. If you'd like me to let you know when I get the first part of the new one up, email me at quidditchgurl93@aol.com and I can send you information. Again, glad you liked it. Cara Nicole Luvitz Report Review
yay i really like this story! 10/10Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you liked it!!!!! I'm working on a new story with the Drarry ship that I'm pretty excited about. I love this ship.... Anyway, thanks for reviewing!!!! Cara Nicole Luvitz Report Review
oh, i love the story. it's probably one of the best draco/harry stories i've read. it's going to be a favoirte of mine! 10/10 by the way Report Review
Brilliant story, not to mention ur fantastic taste in music. I dont think u need to carry on this story, but id suggest something about Ron getting extremely paranoid. hope it helps. x Report Review
Great again. Ron's horrible sometimes, i don't know whether he would do that or not, it is hard to decipher. But i liked it none the less.Author's Response: Yay, glad you liked it!!!! I was sort of worried about this chapter, but a friend of mine read it and said she liked it and thought it fit, so here it is...lol Thanks again. Cara Nicole Luvitz Report Review
IM A GIRL AND R U SICK! U COULD DO WAY BETTER Report Review
Ok, I've never read a Harry/Draco fic before, and after this, I hate to say it, but I never will. I hate to be so blunt, but that was really the most unbelievable fanfic I've ever read, and trust me, I read Dramione fics everyday, I know what I'm talking about. I mean, I guess the plot is interesting, though I think Ron and Hermione would be plotting to throw Draco off the astronomy tower, and while the other students shocked reaction is normal, it is the only thing that is in character. Wouldn't they be denying their feelings for a long time before they got together? And wouldn't they be better at hiding it than this? But, whatever. I'm extrmely sorry, I know that sounded really rude, but I was looking forward to a DRaco/Harry fic after I've read some of your other fics, and I was sorely disappointed. I really know that you're a good writer, but Draco/Harry fics just might not be your forte. You write Dramione very well, and I tihnk it is your stronger point. But, I'll stop now, you're probably tired of my ramblings. UNtil next time.Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you took a chance at it, at least. Have you read any other other chapters to it? The first chapter was written early on in eighth grade, but the others are more recent. I think I've improved quite a bit with the others. The first chapter was farely unbelievable, I undertand. I think so myself and there may be a revamping on that in the future if I get a chance. Thank you for giving Drarry a chance, though. My un-canon self appreciates it. :D Thanks for the review, and I'm very sorry you were disappointed in it. Cara Nicole Luvitz Report Review
I luuuv this story! it is 1 of the best put 2gether and thought out stories I've ever read! please write more it is great!Author's Response: Thanks!!! I'm so glad you like it! I'm in the brainstorming stages for chapter 7 right now, I'll do my best to have it up as soon as possible. Thanks for reviewing!!!! Cara Nicole Luvitz Report Review
OMG this is one of the best stories I have ever read! It is so dramatic and romantic! If this were a movie, it would be my favorite. :-)Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I'll be working on the next chapter over the next week or so. It should be up soon!!!! Thanks again for reviewing!!!! Cara Nicole Luvitz Report Review
i know you already have a banner but i made you one also:] if you would just like to see it, please email me at yjoana@yahoo.com and ill show you. if you use it, please credit me:]] Report Review
this is really good and the songs work really well :DAuthor's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it. Chapter six is in validation and should be up sometime after the holidays. :D Thanks for reviewing!!! Cara Nicole Luvitz Report Review
lol i thought it ended at chapter three (which is why i said i was looking for a happy ending lol) although slash isnt really my thing im really enjoying this story and its so well written its really good pretty tasteful too if you know what i meanAuthor's Response: Thanks. I'm working on Chapter 6 now, but I'm having a bit of trouble with plots at the moment. That's what I get for trying to write two separate Draco stories at once! ;) Thanks for the review! Report Review
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