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Review #1, by Trina216 2 am

20th January 2007:
okay i love this song!!! i was thinking about writing a songfic for this song too (don't worry i won't take your ideas!) i think its really good but you should put the lyrics in italics because otherwise its kind of confusing and also i think its a little repetitive cuz in the story your using basically the same words as the lyrics

i'll give you a 9/10!! read some of my stories sometime please!


Author's Response: Thank you!! Thats how I do One-shots!! Repetitiveness!!! I will read sum of yours, u have ta read soem of the ones by my friend KeevinLover_9216!! she is a genius! Thank you

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Review #2, by AloneintheDark 2 am

31st December 2006:
i love th song.. nto what i expected for a fic tho... very original thoughts tho. over all there was some confusion that needs to be cleared up thru editing. but i thought it was a good story all the same... 7/10, for the confusion. :) ~Luna (aka AloneintheDark)

Author's Response: thank you very much, the song was once explined to me like that and i just went with it!

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