cool!!! i really liked it.it was really nice and romantic.lily was described beautifully.

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awww how sweet i love it

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Aw that was really sweet I loved it!

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Oh, this is such a cute story. It reminds me strongly of a story a friend once told me, about how he went out on several dates with a girl and always missed the chance to kiss her. I enjoyed reading your story, it was very nice.

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I love these cute little stories. You are a really good writer...what happened to some of your other ones, though??

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this is wonderful story
u no i was about to put awww at the start but i think i do tht in all my reviews!

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oh seriously very cute!!!

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Ah! How sweet!

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I love that song! go you!

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i really liked this story.it made me feel like i was there. good job.

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Beautiful... like all others!! 1O/1O

~Sirius

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Very cute! Peter and his cheese stash very amusing lol.

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Ah absotively amazing!! Excellent writing and super duper fluffiness-which always warms my heart! The only thing that bothered me (which is because of having a spelling/grammer freak father and friend) is that you used "Your" as in possession where it should be a "You're" as in you are. Great way to answer the challange!
Keep writing
Love ~K

Author's Response: Oh...I know. I'm really really bad at that and I am working on fixing that bad habit. *tsks self* That's what happens when you spend too long talking on messenger...lol. Thanks, and I'm really glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the awesome review!
Love from Drue
xoxoxox

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aww that was so sweet. James adorable!

Author's Response: Hehehe. I know...*thinks of James*...*faints* He's so...gorgeous. Thank you so much, and I'm very glad that you liked it.
Love from Drue
xoxoxo

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I just wanted to say... that i loved how you had James and Lily the same characters throughout your stories.. (i am refuring to the posters next to the titles... it is something you don't always see.. it is much easier to picture them... 'specially in your amazing writing
lyl,
lions_heart
10/10 on all your stories i have read so far!!!

Author's Response: Aww! Thank you so much!!! I love seeing your name pop up more and more!!!! I hope that more of my stories may intrest you! Thanks!
Love from Drue
xoxoxo

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Cute!.
I liked how you had his thoughts in there.
His urge to kiss her... yet.. almost...almost afraid.
it was beautifully written i must say...
lyl,
lions_heart

Author's Response: hehe! Thanks!!
Love from Drue
xoxoxo

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I noticed a lot of your other stories in this one or a lot of this story in your other ones. You pick. Still really sweet though.

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hi
i loved this little story
thanks
golden
x x x x x x x

Author's Response: Thanks!
Love from Drue
xoxoxo

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I aboslutley love this. your such a talented writer. I love how Lily became nice to him.

Author's Response: Aww. Thank you so much, funny. I know...you don't see Lily being nice to him very often. Hehe. I'm very glad you liked it. Thanks for leaving such an inspiring review.
Love from Drue
xoxoxo

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that was.good. i love how you set the mod and everything. a good explaination of how they met. 20/10

Author's Response: Aww. Thank you so much. I am really glad you liked it. Really!?! A 20/10!! Thank you so much!! My writings do not deserve such great praise from you excellent reviewers. *blush*
Love from Drue
xoxox

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That's so sweet.
~ Leah

Author's Response: Thank you! I am seeing your name more and more. I am glad that my writing can keep you entertained. *wink*
Love from Drue
xoxoxo

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love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love love it! I sware i typed all of those! NO COPY AND PASTING, I SWARE! srry, in a hper mood! how old r u, cause ure stories r terrific compared to mine on the know it all! well, love the story and the little mermaid so this was a big fit for me! LOVE IT!

Author's Response: Hehehe. *blush* Thank you so much, hun. This is such a great review and you made me so happy. Thanks so much and I hope I can still keep you entertained.
Love from Drue
xoxoxo

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yay! they kissed! I loved it so much!!! I love the little mermaid and im not one of those girls whose says they like children movies to make the children happy! I REALLY DO LOVE THE LITTLE MERMAID! Its one of my favorite movies (for proof just ask funny_lol, shes one of my BFF, other then HP of course! Well anyway, loved the story, im putting it in my favorites on my other account! STRAIGHT AWAY! loved it much, did it win the competition? this story? the one u entered it in? Well, g2g, BYE!

Author's Response: Hehehe. YAY! They kissed. Weee! Wooo-hoo! Your favorites!! Alright!! Thank you sooo mucho!
Love from Drue
xoxoxo

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great story!

Author's Response: THANK YOU!
Love from Drue
xoxoxo

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Awesome song, awesome story. Good job!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!!!! Glad you enjoyed it, and that you took the time to read it!
Love from Drue
xoxoxo

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