Hahaha, I laughed during the Draco/Blaise/Shaz scene at the end. Please write more, I love this story so much! It's funny, cool, and I want to find out what happened with her scar and dream. Nice job! :) Report Review
Harry and Kez are a lot better in this chapter, I like how Harry is explaining to her how he doesn't like Ginny anymore.
At one point Hermione says "witch trail" which should be trial.
Still, I like Draco and Shaz more than Harry and Kez. Report Review
Hahaha, loved that scene with Pansy, and then the end was just perfect. I changed my mind, I like Shaz more than Kez now. Her POV is more interesting and fun to read. Report Review
Harry and Kez together, huh? Actually, I like that, although I felt Harry was out of character in this book, kissing her hand and bringing her into an embrace. Harry's not supposed to be that smooth in the books. Still, I love this! :) Report Review
Pugsy...I mean Pansy. Lol! Okay, I really love Draco in this fanfiction. I also can't believe that Shaz is the Chosen One! :D Report Review
I thought Ron and Kez were going to get together, but after reading this chapter I don't feel the same way. The last line was sad, I really love Kez and Shaz! Report Review
Oh, I loved that whole scene with Shaz and Pansy, hilarious! I really like Shaz and Draco together, they seem perfect for each other. :) Report Review
So far, I love this. Shaz seems like the girl that every school has: popular, get's all the boys, that type, but boy do they make a good story! So far I'm warming up to Kez more, but that's probably because she's the nicer of the two (or so it seems). Great first chapter! Report Review
You, I must say, are brilliant. I absolutely adore Shaz! Report Review
i love this story and i have been waiting fo you to update like since for ever so please hurry up and do it long because i think the other readers and i deserve it don´t avandone it cus its a real good story
PLEASE DON´T AVANDONE THIS STORY AND UPDATE SOON
MY HEART WON´T BE ABLE TO TAKE ANY MORE WAITING.
LOVE... OREO. Report Review
This is a very good story Report Review
*Sigh* I rock! This is my fav chappie I've written so far! YAY! love you Kezzy, HURRY UP!! Your keeping our lovely readers waiting!!!
Really great story!! I love it. Update soon!!! :) Report Review
plz plz update fast Report Review
plz update fast i was waiting 4 the 8th chap.4 over a month
i had like to know y is shaz keeping draco in a spellAuthor's Response: Kez is in the middle of writing the next chapter, so just keep ur eyes peeled for an update! Thanx for reading, hope to hear from ya again! :) Report Review
I love shaz.she is pretty much amazing in my eyes...lolAuthor's Response: *Shaz bows and smiles at yooh!*
Kez: Howeva fab she may seem, Kez is so better and more down-to-earth...
Shaz: But Kez isn't a rebel like me and I'm just super...
This is basically how we ended up doing this story together for we have just different personalities its amazing what we've come up with. But we still have the same interests at heart and that's why we're doing this story... hopefully finishing it too... thanx for revieiwng, hope to hear from ya again! :) Report Review
this story is wicked GOOD!!! love it! please please keep writing soon!!! Author's Response: Always writing whether it be for original writing or hpff writing, we're always typing or scribbling, lolz! We're glad you like the story and we are going to complete this no matter what! We just hope that you keep reviewing with fantastic report. *Kez is thinking about dedicatees!* Report Review
So far so good. Keep up the good work.Author's Response: Thanx so much, we appreciate these comments, it keeps us going and we don't like to disappoint readers. Hope to hear from ya again! :) Report Review
fantastic chapterAuthor's Response: Thank yooh so much, next chapter is going to be written by Kez, so keep ur eyes peeled! ;) Report Review
this banner is amazing!Author's Response: We're glad yooh like it. Kez asked The Dark Arts if anyone can do and we got this finished result. We think its fab too! Thank yooh! :) Report Review
Hmmm. Am adding ypu to my "Good fanfic, but needs to be updating soon, please" List. *hint hint* :D
Author's Response: Yerps! Has just been validated, lolz! I hope ur liking the story though, and the reason not many updates are happening is becoz Shaz and Kez are both v.busy with their own work, but they do try and work this story out as best they can! Thanx for the review anyways... can't wait to hear from ya again! :) Report Review
When will there be more ?? (:Author's Response: Thanx for all ur lurverly reviews (even if some were repeated). Kez is currently waiting for a chap off Shaz, however, Kez has had a big major prob. with her INTERNET! So if Shaz has done another chap, would she kindly email it over to Kez for editing! But thank yooh for ur reviews, we appreciate them! :) Report Review
Great so far! (:Author's Response: Wow! Yooh sent that same review four times over! Fabby! So we'll just say: "YAY!" again for ya! Cheers! :) Report Review
Great so far! (:Author's Response: Yay! Again and again! LoLz! :P Report Review
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