Its brilliant! Very cute and it had me hanging onto every word.Author's Response: thanks kenz.... haha it looks like im talking to myself Report Review
why is he undoing her jeans if she's wearing a dress?Author's Response: thanks girl i didnt realise that but it was meant to be im unzipping his jeana ill edit it thanks agen vyncie Report Review
ok...this was a one-shot rite?? then why did u say u were gona write more?? but i think u should cuz this ends kinda abruptly...i think this should be rated mature, or atleast 15+ for the sex scene.Author's Response: ok i said i'd write more bacuz i was planning to make this fic a spin off of being slayed by the enemy.... and yes i didnt think about the ratings ill make sure to fix that.... vyncie Report Review
Awww.! How cute! I like it!!Author's Response: thanks much apreciated luv ya vyncie Report Review
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