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Review #1, by vguanne_ice_princess Chapter 1:The Date

8th November 2007:
Its brilliant! Very cute and it had me hanging onto every word.

Author's Response: thanks kenz.... haha it looks like im talking to myself

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Review #2, by diamond_phoenix Chapter 1:The Date

7th May 2007:
why is he undoing her jeans if she's wearing a dress?

Author's Response: thanks girl i didnt realise that but it was meant to be im unzipping his jeana ill edit it thanks agen
vyncie


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Review #3, by hogwarts_girl_5 Chapter 1:The Date

12th January 2007:
ok...this was a one-shot rite?? then why did u say u were gona write more?? but i think u should cuz this ends kinda abruptly...i think this should be rated mature, or atleast 15+ for the sex scene.

Author's Response: ok i said i'd write more bacuz i was planning to make this fic a spin off of being slayed by the enemy.... and yes i didnt think about the ratings ill make sure to fix that....
vyncie


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Review #4, by Moon_Wolf Chapter 1:The Date

18th December 2006:
Awww.!
How cute! I like it!!

Author's Response: thanks much apreciated luv ya
vyncie


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