{reviewid: 1723803, reviewer: 'bellavaine143'}
23rd November 2007:
No I really liked this chapter! GOD you're a good writer! Keep it up and update soon!
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{reviewid: 1723796, reviewer: 'bellavaine143'}
23rd November 2007:
AH I LOVE THIS STORY!!! And he's a total jerk but he's hot so its ok...
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{reviewid: 1723790, reviewer: 'bellavaine143'}
23rd November 2007:
Oh my god this is soo great! It totally leaves you hanging and I LOVE it!!! Keep up the great word!
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{reviewid: 1574435, reviewer: 'maulderers411'}
14th August 2007:
that was great can't waitfor the next chapter!!
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{reviewid: 1528155, reviewer: 'imcute410'}
22nd July 2007:
I Like it. I do hope you can get in acouple more chapters in there soon. Keep up the good work!
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{reviewid: 1316698, reviewer: 'elizabeth%20rowan%20black'}
22nd February 2007:
it was ok but yi need to get the next chapter up soon.
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{reviewid: 1226800, reviewer: 'vguanne_ice_princess'}
13th December 2006:
i love how you included his point of view at the end very uncharacteristic of Malfoy to be checking out the know-it-all mudblood don't u think? but thats the fun of it. enjoy writing .
vyncie
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{reviewid: 1226797, reviewer: 'vguanne_ice_princess'}
13th December 2006:
great luv it so far pls continue
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{reviewid: 1226795, reviewer: 'vguanne_ice_princess'}
13th December 2006:
funny its great so far
vyncie
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{reviewid: 1203206, reviewer: 'scarz'}
22nd November 2006:
whens d next story coming up?
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{reviewid: 1197026, reviewer: '%2A'}
15th November 2006:
longer.. it better be. naw jut kiddin. though it would be nice... okies seriously keep up the good work!
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{reviewid: 1196310, reviewer: 'dreamsaresweet'}
15th November 2006:
This is pretty good so far. One thing that is a bit annoying; the paragraphs aren't separted with a space in between them. I don't know if you did this on purpose or not, or if you even know about this, but it would make the story look much easier to read if you separated them.
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{reviewid: 1193866, reviewer: 'dracoismyhottie55'}
12th November 2006:
ha! awsome! update soon! 10/10
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{reviewid: 1190192, reviewer: 'fred'}
9th November 2006:
brilliant chapter, this story is really gud, keep writing and update soon
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{reviewid: 1190187, reviewer: 'fred'}
9th November 2006:
ooh interesting!, gud chapta
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{reviewid: 1190181, reviewer: 'fred'}
9th November 2006:
good first chapter tho it dont think malfoy wud actually hit her
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{reviewid: 1189657, reviewer: 'misshermy'}
8th November 2006:
im glad you updated.. it was a good chapter.. a little short but good..
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{reviewid: 1189619, reviewer: 'Secret'}
8th November 2006:
Update SOON!!!
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{reviewid: 1189612, reviewer: 'Secret'}
8th November 2006:
I'm loving it!
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{reviewid: 1189603, reviewer: 'Secret'}
8th November 2006:
OMG!!! He SLAPPED her!!!
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{reviewid: 1189166, reviewer: 'Chicky'}
8th November 2006:
This story is coming along nicely, keep up the good work!! I really wanna read the next chapter! :)
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{reviewid: 1177220, reviewer: 'dracoismyhottie55'}
27th October 2006:
hahaha pansy! this is awsome! wait i thought hermione has brown eyes...
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{reviewid: 1176395, reviewer: 'misshermy'}
26th October 2006:
great chapter!
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{reviewid: 1175847, reviewer: 'Lilybean84'}
26th October 2006:
Hay! I like it :) Hilarious scene in the bathroom:) I'll be adding this to my favorites and checking up on it often!
Author's Response: Thanks a ton! I don't get much time to update (only about 2 times a week) but don't give up on it! I work on it as much as possible!
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{reviewid: 1175845, reviewer: 'desolate_bliss'}
26th October 2006:
Good idea for a story! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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