Good story!
Thanks fpr writing it!

Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you liked it and your welome I guess.

 Report Review

Great Story 10/10

Author's Response: thank you!

 Report Review

Wow, it was so sad!! It was written so well though, i loved the story! 10/10

The only problem was that i think you spelled their, thier. Sorry, i i notice these little things. ;) Anyways wonderful story!

Author's Response: thank you! i'm so glad you liked it. i was afraid people would think it was too short or something.

yeah, i do that alot. and we just put word onto the computer that i use so i can use that instead of wordpad so my spelling will get better. i notice things like that too, don't worry. thanks for the 10!

 Report Review

Yikes...That was brilliant...sad tho. :(

But definitely hurry and write more! I can't wait to see what happens next. Besides, Lupin is my fav marauder. *Grins*

:)

HermioneAnne

Author's Response: thank you! i'm glad you thought so. yeah, it was a bit sad, but it was suposed to be you know?

it's a one-shot so there isn't going to be anymore. but my friend says she wants me to write something as if Andrew doesn't die because she likes him. so i might do that. i'm not sure though

 Report Review

Amazing, action-packed, terribly heart-wrenching, and it has a loffly summary! I have been waiting soooo much for this to be validated! Coupla typos [HAH! I spelled it right this time!] Awww, this was so sad I felt like cryyyying *zomgTEAR*

10/10, of course!

Hugs, Al

P.S. And if I could I'd give you an 11, just because you didn't make Remus' brother's name Romulus *coughCLICHEcough* XD

Author's Response: thank you. i'm rewriting it at the moment though. it is way too short. but you know that already. you also know how i'm changing it so yeah... yeah, it would have been up sooner but it got rejected because of an open tag at the very end *rolls eyes* and then, when i fixed it i forgot to check the box thingy that says that i changed it and i want to try to re validate it. stupid i know. yeah, i wish i had word upstairs, but i don't so i'm just gonna have to deal with word pad. and i'm too lazy to read over it. i will fix it when i'm done adding to it though.

*claps* you are amazing azah. you spelled it right

yeah, i know but i dont think i really made it as sad as it should be though. i'm trying to fix it though. and i have to fix the suspense in it. it is really bad.

thanks for the 10! and yes, i never really got the Romulus thing. very cliche and pretty lame. i mean Remus and Romulus? who came up with that?

*hugs* Tu.

 Report Review