I loved this story! Thanks for writing! Report Review
Felt that the transitions for the point of view of the characters didn't flow well enough... Report Review
one of the cutest things i've ever read. like seriously. L-O-V-E-D I-T :) Report Review
THIS IS APPRECIATED MUCHLY! WHO NEEDS TO STUDY WHEN THEIR GREAT AUTHORS? YOU'RE A GREAT AUTHOR! Report Review
dude, that was awesome, i dont think anyone will hate you. its kinda cliche, but i think thats why i like it so much, great job :) Report Review
This story was great! I know you completed it quite a while ago but just in case you ever check back in on the site I wanted you to see that someone still appreciates your story. Thank you! Report Review
I loved it!!! You are an amazing writer! You should write real books as well as ff! Report Review
I read your story over the last three days, which is actually a miracle, because I had like three exams to pass :P But I just couldn't stop reading, and even though it's cliché I love it! You just make a few spelling mistakes but from your notes I see you know that anyway, and really it's no big deal...
Btw I love you authors notes :D they made me laugh so hard :D
So, it really is a great story, and I love how your characters are all so unique. I especially like Nat and Eben. They're awesome really, I'd love to have that kind of relationship.
Really really really really great story!!
10/10 Report Review
I have to say this might be the best story ive read. its so much fun. like...i would actually play with whole refuse to lose game with someone. Its not all like...im quivering with excitement cause he is talking to me or im socially awkward and therefore intriguing. its cute and fun and real.
LOVE IT Report Review
loved it so much! i hope you continue to right, and this made me laugh a lot and often Report Review
Funny, well written and an awesome ending, especially for a marauders story :)
What more can I ask for??? (Nothing in case you were wondering lol)
Thanks for writing an excellent fanfic! Report Review
Absolutely brilliant. It went at exactly the right pace and had exactly the right amount of twists and turns and jokes and suspensful bits and...and... Agh! I want to cry from happiness! Report Review
i liked the ending; very different from other sirius/oc's
usually they all end in death; its depressing
so yay for you!!
and i like this picture. its actually my favoritee.
ah well. cant agree on everything in life..
cheers! Report Review
Helllooo! I just have a question for this ah-mazing story you've got going here. Are Analiese, Natalie & Eben in sixth year, whereas the Marauders and Lily are seventh? I've been wondering this for awhile and I can't seem to find it anywhere if their the same ages or not. Thanks :) Report Review
would it be too much to say i think this story is even better than every book i've ever read? and believe me i've read a lot of books. This was probably the best written and cutest stories ever. Report Review
I'm really liking the storyline so far, and the way you write... its really good. My only problem is that Ana, Eben, Nat, (and sometimes Sirius) are constantly arguing or talking about things that don't make sense... it gets really annoying. Like, they never just have a normal conversation.. like all their conversations are trying to prove some stupid point, like the fact that Ana has a problem. and none of their arguments even get them anywhere. It seems like I'm just sitting around waiting for something to happen, for her to find the guy or whatever, but nothing is happening and it doesn't even seem like anything will ever happen... this story seems to be making no progress. I suppose I am only on chapter six. maybe something will happen soon.
Well, I'll keep reading.
~Annaaa Report Review
:D I'm reading this story again and reviewing to all the chapters I didn't review yet. =P Report Review
I love this story so much thanks so much for finishing it! You write sooo well :D Report Review
Lol ;D How I love this story, it never gets old. Report Review
In fact I think confused skated past me long ago wearing a pink feather boa and a straw hat.
Too funny, i had to leave a comment!!
Cheers! Report Review
i was actually laughing at my laptop when i read this,
i shall use some of these lines on my friends :D
yepp, this is very quickly becoming my most favouritest ever,
and thats something :P
x Report Review
can you really get a hat like that?! i want one (;
oh, and before i forget to mention it, i love this story :)
and yes, i do realise you have already completed this story,
therefore some people might see it as a waste of time to comment more..
but reviews are fuun (;
ishh x Report Review
i really truly madly deeply seriously love this.
it made me laugh.
severely actually. . . . . . Report Review
my. how cynical. . . . . but i must admit that i am kind of in love with it! Report Review
Fun. A little confusing, but fun. Report Review
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