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12 Reviews Found

Review #1, by D Lee Worrying

23rd August 2007:
hm i like your story i thought id ssave my review till i read it all tht u had posted its good but u need to explain how dumbledore had a child some names and stuff or it gets flimsy and confusing im not being mean just tryin to help so siriuses partner was dumbledores daughter ok it is a bit weird but at least its unique lol

well written apart from tht u do seem to hate pronouns i notiuced abit tht u repeated my uncle twice when second time you could of said he :)

still good thougth waitin for more

Dom xxx

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Review #2, by cornish_pixies Midnight Talk and Meeting Hagrid

21st August 2007:
i love your story its amazing! i give it a ten

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Review #3, by Wand Maker Extraordinaire Worrying

30th June 2007:
this is a cute story! i really like it. update soon!

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Review #4, by ValorOrgulloso the antidote

16th December 2006:
I can't wait for the next chapter! This story is really good!! Please update soon!

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Review #5, by Flower123 the antidote

9th December 2006:
he likes he i know he does.update soon

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Review #6, by red head the antidote

25th November 2006:
so far so good keep going

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Review #7, by bubbygirl the antidote

12th November 2006:
Hi. great start. I'd like to see more detail about how dumbledore is still alive and snape didn't kill him, but maybe that's to come? Also I'd like to see a bit more on how Harry and Chris knew each other when Harry was young. Other than that, great story. Keep up the good work.

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Review #8, by Roochie the antidote

12th November 2006:
i love it your an awesome write please cont.

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Review #9, by Sirius_gurl potions class

29th October 2006:
Love it...Keep it up.

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Review #10, by kandy potions class

29th October 2006:
did she make it too strong or she actually saying that?update soon

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Review #11, by kandy Midnight Talk and Meeting Hagrid

23rd October 2006:
So thats sirius daughter, thats good and harry likes her!even better,UPDATE SOON

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Review #12, by musicfanatic77 Midnight Talk and Meeting Hagrid

21st October 2006:
I really like this chapter, it's really good!
Update Soon!!

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