hm i like your story i thought id ssave my review till i read it all tht u had posted its good but u need to explain how dumbledore had a child some names and stuff or it gets flimsy and confusing im not being mean just tryin to help so siriuses partner was dumbledores daughter ok it is a bit weird but at least its unique lol

well written apart from tht u do seem to hate pronouns i notiuced abit tht u repeated my uncle twice when second time you could of said he :)

still good thougth waitin for more

Dom xxx

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i love your story its amazing! i give it a ten

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this is a cute story! i really like it. update soon!

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I can't wait for the next chapter! This story is really good!! Please update soon!

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he likes he i know he does.update soon

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so far so good keep going

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Hi. great start. I'd like to see more detail about how dumbledore is still alive and snape didn't kill him, but maybe that's to come? Also I'd like to see a bit more on how Harry and Chris knew each other when Harry was young. Other than that, great story. Keep up the good work.

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i love it your an awesome write please cont.

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Love it...Keep it up.

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did she make it too strong or she actually saying that?update soon

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So thats sirius daughter, thats good and harry likes her!even better,UPDATE SOON

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I really like this chapter, it's really good!
Update Soon!!

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