OMG PLEASE UPPDATE!!
I CANT WAIT!!!
ILL BE CHECKING EVERYDAY!
(OH YEAH I WILL!!)Author's Response: I'll try. I've veeeeerrrrryyyyy busy. THANKS FOR READING Report Review
It's adorable but the way its written in some points are a bit childish and i think the story would be more passionet if you used wiser words.Author's Response: um.... im only 12 Report Review
yes fighting that was good short but goodAuthor's Response: thanks! Report Review
I had pancakes for breakfast this morning.
can you help me with the title for my story? right now it's about this french girl(contribute to you!) named Antuanette Dellaraux. and it's called The White Heart of Antuanette Dellaraux. i think it's okay but it can get better.
and now for the R&R. OKAY! i know that i've reviewed this before but I'M DOING IT AGAIN!
and..(drum roll)..IT WAS LIKE AWSOME!Author's Response: kirsty, please get a life.
but on a happier not, i like the title as it is. Report Review
you are annoying me with your spelling now.
and this chapter was exactly like the last one.
oh no! my evil is showing! i'm sorry!
i liked it! Report Review
i'm in love....
hermione is such a fart for doing that.
it really good.
lluuuurrrvee and kitten hugs,
kirsty Report Review
ok, here's the kudos. i hope you know what those are
-very original(ORIGINAL, nneka, ORIGINAL.)
-cool how harry's a quidditch player.
and then there's the critizism(i think)
-STOP SPELLING NOW LIKE KNOW.
-hermione and ron would know the freakin risks of sex before marraige, and honestly, sex before marraige lowers my respect for them BY A MILE.
-check your spelling. honestly.
but most of it was pretty gooood. Author's Response: i get it kirsty. spelling. YOU KNOW I SUCK AT SPELLING!!! Report Review
OMG!!!!!!! HURRY UP WITH THE UPDATES!!!! UR KILLING ME...killing me u hear? so chop chop! loved it heaps!!! cant wait for the next timeAuthor's Response: i am working on it. i can only type so fast.
thatnks for reading Report Review
i ve honestly read way better and u made quiet a few mistakes urselfAuthor's Response: yeah i know
did i review you and say something mean?
cause if idid, sorry
ive been in a kinda stinky mood this weekend.
SHE GOT MARRIED?!?!?! HOW DARE SHE!!! dude u gotta update soon im talking real soon!!!Author's Response: lol, i'll try too. i am working on it as i speak. Report Review
ugh i'm so horrible, i have midterms tomorrow and here i am reading ur story. lol i like but it's just a little unbelievable that that would be the last time they saw each other. i mean like harry said, they can apparate why couldn't they just apparate to each other? i like how hermione came back in and shouted, very hermioneish however one suggestion is to maybe be a bit more descriptive, perhaps describe their reactions and such. i'm looking forward to see what u'll write next. update soonAuthor's Response: thanks for reading it. and, ron is going to be in australia for some reason, harry shall be in america, and hermione will be in london. they will be living there. forever. maybe not forever, but... w/e. and i was trying to make it more dramatic. you can also read my other story if you havent. i just added a new chapter to that one. lol! Report Review
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