s'ok. i just hate the part of the story when lily just blurts out i love you too. Report Review
thats smart. and i also like the story :]Author's Response: thanx. so glad u reviewed. Report Review
very cool... though shldve been longer!! wy dont you do a sequel?Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Sorry it wasn't longer. And I can't do a sequel. It's just not one of those sequel stories. It's meant to show how they fall in love. Nothing else. Really sorry. But thanks for reviewing!!! Report Review
Aw, thats sweet. Really good.
9 out of 10Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
Why a nine out of ten? That makes me feel sad.
THANKS FOR REVIEWING!!!! Report Review
that was pretty good. you are a good writer. i hope to see more from you! = ) Author's Response: Thanks a bunch. I feel so happy now. I'll update as soon as the deadline is over. HAPPY HOLIDAYS!!! Report Review
This is an excellent one-shot.Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it Report Review
*sticks out toung* Report Review
oh, plez do! it will help you practise for POP! ^_^Author's Response: STOP USING THIS AS A CHAT SITE!!! IF YOU WANT TO TALK TO ME, CALL ME OR EMAIL ME!!!
PS. that's a friend of mine to other reviewers. She insisted on not emailing me. It's really annoying. Report Review
OMG I AM SO GLAD YOU WROTE A ONE-SHOT!!!! THIS WAS SOOOOOOOOOOO BEAUTYFULL!!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE STORIES!!!!!!!! AND PLEASE UPDATE A NEW WORLD SOON TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Author's Response: Yeah, I wrote a one-shot. Thanks for likeing it. Um...I'm thinking about writing another story. I'll try to update others soon. Report Review
Oh!oh! i know! i know! oh, pick me! pick me! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEE??????????? LOL! i know what you could write a short story on! just an idea, but you could write a short on the war and how you think it is going to happen! just an idea! i give lots! i always say that you don't have to take it. see you at school today! LOL
-joAuthor's Response: Thanks for the idea. Might go with it. Don't know for sure. Report Review
Hey Annie! i thought it was really great! although, you did leave out a letter when you had lily say "what the Hell are you talking about?" up in the begining, you used the wrong there when lily said ' what do you think THEIR goal was?" just a few wrong things, but every thing else was perfect! i told you that if your worlds story was perfect that you could make a good one-shot too! ^_^ well, got to go! c ya!Author's Response: Do you want me to correct on YOUR spelling? No, so please don't correct anything in mine, got it? Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Wow. Perfect. I love the plot, writing, and closing. I mean most one shots have me saying, "Wow, good, but I need more." You know? They just seem so unfinished. This one could go either way. I loved it! It was great! Please write more stories! :)
~Cait~Author's Response: Thanks! I'm beaming right now. A New World is being beta'ed. I'm thinking about starting another story, but it has to be a short story, and I don't know what to write about. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
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