That was sweet! I've always thought of Fabian and Gideon as Molly's older brothers (no idea why! I guess I see Molly as the oldest), but I like her as their older sister.Author's Response: thanks! Molly is such a nurturer, that it just seemed natural to me that she would be their older sister. Report Review
This was really good. We don't know too much about Gideon & Fabian, but it seems logical that they would have been just as you described. Well done!Author's Response: Thanks for reading the story AND reviewing. Glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
I really like your story! Some of my favorite fan fics are ones that take minor characters and expand them into an interesting story. Am I correct in thinking that the spirit of her brothers is what "infested" Fred and George? This is a very creative idea and well-written, too.Author's Response: Yeah, I was thinking with them both being sets of twins that there should be some connection. I also kind of wanted it them to know Molly was going to have twins before she did. That's why they have a "slightly mischievous grin" on their face after they've passed. Report Review
one word: WOW. this was possibly the best one shot ever written. im still getting over the shock of it. its like pro writing, amazing writing. your writing style is just BRILLIANT. amazing and awesome job!
i shall be adding this to my fave's and reccommending it.
-nora.Author's Response: Thanks, it was fun to write. I've been toying with some other plot bunnies regarding Molly, but I have a two-year-old and I'm taking night classes so time is at a premium. Please recommend it to as many people sa possible I love to see the read count climb! Report Review
Its too good. Oh so beautiful. Absolutely lovely. A very unique concept. Wonderful. Its so clever how you show that twins run from Molly's side and how they are like the uncles. Too good!
10 on 10!Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for the glowing review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
Awesome! You're a great writer, and I love how you delved in to Molly's character. As far as I've found, a lot of people tend to overlook her.
;)Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Since I became a mom myself, I find myself identifying with Molly more and more. ;) Report Review
WOW! that was Fabulous, I can't believe you don't have any reviews. This is my 1st Gideon/Fabian (love those names) fic, so I have no idea how it is supposed to go, like, I have no idea what their characters are supposed to be like. But i liked the comparison between Fred n' George and Molly's bro's. REALLY GOOD JOB! I heart it =)Author's Response: Thanks! This was my first fanfic ever. My first piece of fiction since I was in high school. (I imagine I'm somewhat older than most of the writers on this site.) I don't worry too much about reviews, I used to read a lot of stories that I liked and not review them. Now, that I have my own stuff out there, though, I know how important the feedback is. Thanks again for letting me know you liked it! Report Review
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