OMFG yu updated =]...I've been sad and have checked everyday..nearly. I thought i was seeing things when i saw chapter 8 =D. Wow i lovedd that chapter, this story is soo interesting. I really cannot wait to read more so pleaseee try not to wait so long for this update =[ =]=]
Alex xxAuthor's Response: thanks for the review and the lovely and loyal watching and waiting. YOU ROCK! Report Review
wow lupins lol that really very funny neways that was cool please update soonAuthor's Response: love you always nads! oh, and yah, lupin...keep him in mind for the next chapter... Report Review
very confused right now. but i like it. keep where your heading. Author's Response: hey, this chap isn't completed yet, i was pressed for time when I wrote it so yah, look at it again sometime! Report Review
oh man that was cool cant wait till you update please update doonAuthor's Response: thanks, nads! you know, you have been my most loyal reviewer (that i have never met personally that is!) and i thank you much for it! don't worry, when i get time, i will read your stuff and write more of mine! hey, i'm also kissedbyavampire so, check that stuff out too!
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o another great chappie.great to come to on crimbo day =]...well actually it is now past 12 so its boxing day buh watever =]
pleasee update soon =P
Alex xxAuthor's Response: hey, glad you liked it! but...i was rushed and it's not finished yet! as soon as this whole "can't do nuffink over holidays" thing is over, i'm adding to it. Report Review
ok its a bit weird i might say but it was still good and i cant wait till you update coz i want to know what happens lol Author's Response: don't worry. it'll be good. promise, and I don't make promised i can't keep! Report Review
ok so who is this challen person cant wait to find out im really interestedAuthor's Response: challen will be introduced soon. trust me on this. if you look for him, he will come. just joshing with you but, he will be here by at least chap 13. i mega promise Report Review
who was that mystery person and where has Hermione gone i think its cool that Peeves is helping for once well twice actually coz her helped the Weasely twins Author's Response: keep on reading, even though i know you already have from your review, but peeves is cool. i had to add him in because he, well, he needs some attention after he was brushed off from the movies. Report Review
nah the kiss was fine pity it wasnt longer lol oh well i still like this chapter cant wait to read the nextAuthor's Response: glad you're enjoying it and thanx for the upliftin' comment about the kiss. *sigh*. i wish that he would kiss me... Report Review
Draco is well his normal self lol what else is new i cant wait to see what happens next Author's Response: of course he's his normal self! he's a malfoy and no matter how much he wishes to deny that, he will always be a malfoy! lol Report Review
nah i like it. It's full of emotion and that so yah i cant wait to read the next chapter.Author's Response: thanx!
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those who do who have stories, i usually check out and R & R for them to so its a win-win situation Report Review
wow, is all i can say =]
Alex xxAuthor's Response: glad you so obviously liked it.
i'm not sure how to continue, so don't expect anything before the "break" Report Review
very good em!! cant wait for more and im very imperiesed!!(uh spelling mistke ) :)Author's Response: good to hear from you, ami. (or jess, whoever) no, i know it's you ami. thanks for reviewing. oooxooo (x-nay on the iss-kay) Report Review
Wow! This is really creative and descriptive. I like the idea of the DA turning into a full-fledged organization with the cloaks and their meanings and councils and stuff. Very cool!Author's Response: thanks. that was kind of a brain blurb (not a brain fart, mind you) at the last minute and i was like, okay this is cool! i love it when i get brain blurbs, they're so fun! Report Review
okAuthor's Response: how articulate of you. very stimulating.
okay, but what do you really think? Report Review
I was going to review before but I never think to do it before I go on to the next chapter, my v. bad badness.
On the brightside I remember all of what I read and I loved it - I hope that you write more soon!Author's Response: Hello, Lumiere!
I love your name, for starters. Thanx so much for reviewing me! Much candy and whatever else I blessed all my reviewers with in that one chap. Thanx for the insentive to continue (not like i was actually planning on droppin' it anyways). It's always appreciated.
-crazy_shamel Report Review
I can't wait 'til you update. Very good and not a run of the mill story line either.Author's Response: Hey, bookworm12173
Wow, what a name. Kinda odd...like me.
Anyfuzzbucket, thanx for reviewing my story. It's my baby (hypothetically speaking) on this fan site. Please check out my other penname if you please. (kissedbyavampire)
there are a lot of stories i'd like to promote, so check out my favorites. Report Review
The review box was calling me. AHHH it's alive. Anyways it was really good. Slightly geeky in somé parts but, people call me a geek so nothing wrong with that XD. Author's Response: it's stalking you...
anywho, glad you reviewed, its always nice. thanks for liking it and yes, it is geeky, but what the hey, that's okay
(i'm a poet, but did know it, hah) Report Review
hey! your story is really really good so far! soo much mystery!! i love it! keep up the good work!Author's Response: hey, friend of a wizard! glad you like it. tell me if i ever stray from my writing form, i've been known to get a little brainy with ma words in the middle, iffin you get my drift. Report Review
Hey, this was really intriguing. You are very descriptive and heroic in your writing if you know what I mean. I could see you writing one of your own fantasy novels. I knew Voldemort couldn't be a complete monster there still had to be some human left in him, even though he was divided into horcruxes. Great Job hun! I give you a 10/10 for pure genius. By the way, I like weird stories. ; )
Liadan LightflowerAuthor's Response: HEY YO! you, like made my day! i reallyreallyreally want to be an author one day! I already have *ahem* six books (novels really) started and one completed *big whoop*. It finished with 204 8x11 pages so YEE-AAA
thankyouthankyou for reviewing! Report Review
that was AWESOME
utahAuthor's Response: jabip Report Review
aw!!! are draco and hermione going to be the love match for this story?? i hope soo. love it. see ya dude.Author's Response: look at banner again, nitwit and it will say pairing "dra/herm" Report Review
what? i am confused with the colored cloaks stuff. but this just me. i am always confused. anyway enough babbling its good love it.Author's Response: twiddling is better. read the cloak thing again iffin you don't comprende
8^) Report Review
really good emily!! loved it want more!! need more. peace out brother.Author's Response: you tupid
i kill you
and no, i did not forget the s Report Review
ohhh who is Challen cant wait 4 nex chappieAuthor's Response: thanx 4 review
this is my first story and i'm working on the next "chappie" Report Review
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