Why didn't I see this before? It's a really good fic... Ha Ha Percy being spontanious very funny! But how did Ron take Mione's and Percy 1st kiss..? You left us the reader hanging please add more...
Well written... Well done! Report Review
write next that when flure throws her flowers Hermione catches them and Percy the garterAuthor's Response: I didn't think about seriously writing a sequel, but it is a possiblity... your idea might be a little bit too cliche... we will see Report Review
I really liked this. I think that it was a little unbelievable that Hermione would say she loves him that fast but other than that it was really good. It is going into my favorites. Nice unusualy pairing. ~Crystal Report Review
Hmm. What to say, what to say. Well, I haven't read a lot of Percy/Hermione fics, but I offered to read stories, and I enjoyed this. Percy owning a Ferrari is an... interesting twist, but fun nonetheless. I happen to absolutely love this song, too. This was well-written, with a few awkward bits here and there, but nothing serious.Author's Response: Thank sooo much! I when I started to write it, I didn't plan to have a Percy/Hermione ending, but it just happened.... Report Review
'Charlie burst out laughing, Ginny and Hermione looked at them with horrified expressions and Mrs. Weasley looked ready to explode, “WHAT ARE YOU TWO DOING?”
“We are mourning the loss of our dear brother,” Fred started.
“From this day forward, he will no longer be Bill,” George continued.
“He will be ‘Fleur’s husband’.”
“A tragic ending to one so great.”
“A prefect who became Head Boy,”
“Forever sealing his fate.”
“He was doomed the moment that he received-“\
“ENOUGH!” Mrs. Weasley yelled, “You two will learn to behave if it’s the last thing I do!'"
OOOOOOH, you are AMAZING not only is this AWESOME but Fred and George are BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!! (and this song!)
10/10 for a SPIFFTACULAR job and a GREAT Fred/George quote. Author's Response: THANK YOU!!! I love Fred and Geogre and I have alway love JKR's passages where Fred and George finish each other's thoughts/sentences, so I'm honored that you liked mine! Report Review
hehehehe! that was great! heehehehe! yay for percy! good good! Report Review
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