WOOT! You updated! It was very VERY good. ^_^ Keep it up! Report Review
Hello. I just finished reading the whole thing to this point and had to comment. I am really enjoying it! I can't believe Dumbledore hasn't figured out he has a student missing and that that student went missing at the time of Hermione's attack. But, I am sure you will fix that soon and get him caught and punished! I also love the slow build to a relationship that you have made. Please update again soon. Thanks! Report Review
This is really a great story!! It's completely believable but I can't believe Blaise got away unscathed! I mean, wouldn't Dumbledore notice that Blaise is missing from Hogwarts and he probably did the curses to Hermione? And what happened to Chapter 11? Please update real soon and let me know, firstname.lastname@example.org. Thanks! =) 10/10 Report Review
Is it just me or is chapter 11 missing? Anyway, great story! Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about that. I thought it was validated but it wasn't. It should be re-validated by the end of the weekend hopefully. *crosses fingers* Report Review
i really loved this chapter but u should have add malfoy telling dumbledore who actually hurt hermione. but otherwise it is very great.
ps- great handwriting Report Review
Do keep on writing! I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next! Report Review
Wonderful wonderful WONDERFUL work! Keep it up! I can't wait until you update! ^^ Report Review
I like it but I need to know more so update!!! Author's Response: I have done so, and I thank you for your review!
~Mariska- Report Review
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