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Reading Reviews for A Fine Line
8 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Aly Sand in the Wound

26th October 2007:
WOOT! You updated! It was very VERY good. ^_^ Keep it up!

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Review #2, by HarryGinny4eva Yell Your Heart Out

16th October 2007:
Hello. I just finished reading the whole thing to this point and had to comment. I am really enjoying it! I can't believe Dumbledore hasn't figured out he has a student missing and that that student went missing at the time of Hermione's attack. But, I am sure you will fix that soon and get him caught and punished! I also love the slow build to a relationship that you have made. Please update again soon. Thanks!

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Review #3, by mlui Sand in the Wound

20th August 2007:
Hi Mariska,
This is really a great story!! It's completely believable but I can't believe Blaise got away unscathed! I mean, wouldn't Dumbledore notice that Blaise is missing from Hogwarts and he probably did the curses to Hermione? And what happened to Chapter 11? Please update real soon and let me know, m_l_ml@hotmail.com. Thanks! =) 10/10

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Review #4, by nnanaa Sand in the Wound

21st May 2007:
Is it just me or is chapter 11 missing? Anyway, great story!

Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about that. I thought it was validated but it wasn't. It should be re-validated by the end of the weekend hopefully. *crosses fingers*

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Review #5, by shurooqsalman Awakenings

11th April 2007:
i really loved this chapter but u should have add malfoy telling dumbledore who actually hurt hermione. but otherwise it is very great.
ps- great handwriting

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Review #6, by nnanaa Awakenings

1st April 2007:
Do keep on writing! I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next!

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Review #7, by Aly Leave

7th March 2007:
Wonderful wonderful WONDERFUL work! Keep it up! I can't wait until you update! ^^

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Review #8, by Sandra Crashing

28th November 2006:
I like it but I need to know more so update!!!

Author's Response: I have done so, and I thank you for your review!

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