Whoa - interesting pairing, and a fun dynamic between these two. Very well done.
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for some odd reason im really into lily/sirius's today so i went and looked up a lot of them!!
this was really good and i enjoyed in imensley!! it was a little fast but the "it had been lurking out of sight, in the dark, but had controlled his mind slightly." was really really cool!!^_^ i think ill go read some more of ur fics!!
-IsabelleAuthor's Response: Yep, it's a little fast, but except for that I think it's pretty good, actually. Thanks for reviewing, Isabelle! Report Review
Wow, that was weird, probably because this is the first Sirius/Lily fiction I've read. It seemed rushed, but it was an entertaining read nevertheless.Author's Response: I think most of my one-shots are rushed. :p Probably because I'm just suddenly inspired when I write them. Then the inspiration tells me to stop writing. Report Review
Yay! There's not nearly enough good Sirius/Lily out there but this is great. Really in character, and really quite hot!Author's Response: Thank you! ^_^ Report Review
this needs a real ending..like i wanna see james's reaction.sequel pleeese!!Author's Response: I'm sorry if you didn't like the ending, but I definitely won't do a sequel. Who says James ever got to know about it? ;) Report Review
ahhh I really love Sirius/Lily and I liked this well doneAuthor's Response: Thank you! :) I got a soft spot for Sirius/Lily after I wrote this. Report Review
Nice. Normally, I don't go for Sirius/Lily, but I liked it. And you ended it just perfectly, the reader can imagine what they did, what they didn't do. Love it. Author's Response: I'm really glad you like it! :D Report Review
please carry onAuthor's Response: Sorry, but it's a one-shot. Report Review
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