Did she fall asleep in Sirius's bedroom at the Potters house? Or her guest bedroom at he Potter's?
-- The girls name should be Aurora, or Amythyst! :) Great story by the way :) I cant wait to read more Report Review
um, i think she fell unconcience after she drank the white wine and then she started dreaming all of the makeout stuff. am i right? i bet i am! woot! ok, let me know if im right. update soon!Author's Response: ... did you know you're actually the first person to guess that correct? Report Review
Isn't Angel a bit of a Mary-Sue? She gets the guys, lots of friends, she's smart, she beats the Marauders in pranks, wins all the bets, etc.Author's Response: no, not excatly it gets worse for her, I just started it that way, but later, when I finish Do You Dare? I'll come back to this one, her life gets alot worse Report Review
Good story, Hogwarts Express?Author's Response: no she was at the party Report Review
Great story adn I think She passed out at Lily's House. Author's Response: soz no it was latr then that 'cause she woke up in a bed at the potters remember? Report Review
OMG ! did they just sleep together! hahahahahahahahahaha awsome stroy thoughAuthor's Response: no they did not she dreamed that happened then sirius heard and thought she was having a nightmare and then realised what happened heheheh Report Review
Nice descriptions of the outfits! love the story. the quill thing sounds alot like the fake wands of fred and georges. hahahahaha o well its kewlAuthor's Response: yeah oops oh well glad u like it though more will come asap Report Review
geez...seriouly if these people want Angel dead, just kill her, don't put her through all that unneeded torture. The poor dear...anyways great story.Author's Response: thanks yeah i know but the sory gets better Report Review
i loved it, update sooon!Author's Response: i am, don't worry, should be up soon...i hope Report Review
eh...I'm cunfussiled! Who's the teacher.Oh, that kind of goes without saying! Sorry! I just got confused because you made it sound like Angel was the teacher!! Just ingnore this paragraph, I don't even know why I'm going to submit it.Oh, I'm just to lazy to hit delete. Imagin that.
This chpater was good.but I liked the first ones better...8/10Author's Response: yeah i know not my best work but i love the next chapter i find it funny so you have to read it Report Review
The plot line is very good but you should work on your spelling and grammar. Maybe if someone helped you edit that would help. Otherwise it is a very good story
Author's Response: no worries, i've finally got word on my new computer so i can use spell check now Report Review
u should make moreAuthor's Response: I am but there's a little problem, it wo't get validated, it's taking so long, i've waited way over a week but nothen happened oh well Report Review
this story is so bad
the plot is lose, the characters are not fully developed, and the writing style is like s**t
do the world a favor and stop writing
giving u a 1 for effort but you really dont deseve itAuthor's Response: it's nice 2 know that i don't care as long as they're people who do i will be fine and FYI the chracaters aren't developed because you find out more through out the series Report Review
[im not logged in but that's my username] I love the plot and Angel especially. But if you could, you might check the spelling/grammar or get a beta to do it, 'cus it's sometimes a distraction. And if you want to make your chapters longer you could elaborate more, like more details...like the little things that happen, ex: [weather, what people are wearing...etc] but besides that everything is great!Author's Response: i know i know pwoplw tell me this all the time and i'm working on it, spelling and gramar anrn't a worry any,ore use spellcheck instead of write it straight away and for making it longe i'll try Report Review
AH...this was such an interesting chapter...need more. Angel does seem to be in mortal peril a lot. Jee, you'd think she could at least live a couple of minutes. Anyways great job, oh and by the way, you forgot to finish one of your sentences...Author's Response: oops i'll fix that now, thans 4 telling me Report Review
yikes! Author's Response: yeah sad eh? Report Review
OMG...I love this chapter...first time I've read about someone pranking the mauraders...great job!Author's Response: yeah i needed to prank them, besides angel needs 2 be happy be4 she's shot down Report Review
this is such an interesting story so far.Author's Response: good to know Report Review
Brilliant. onto the next chapter!
Author's Response: hope u enjoy it Report Review
AWSOME STORY PLEASE WRITE MORE!
Author's Response: I am i'm just waiting for it to get validated Report Review
wow, nice chappie, I love it!! This is a great fic and you should keep on writing!! 10/10 once again and 1 of my favorites! Yay favorites!! lol, slytherins daceing, I would PAY to see that. lol.
Your bio's kind of creepy to, but I love that 2! lol, I love it all!Author's Response: mmm... ,thanks, i love ur story as well have u written a new chapter yet? Report Review
I like it, i have a fic sort of like this called I'm Just Different, but i think yours is really really good! Keep writing and update son!!! :) 10/10Author's Response: u know what, i'm gonna read yours so i can get ideas, i won't steal anything but i'm glad you like Report Review
I REALLY LOVE THIS CHAPTER!! And you hva such a beautiful banner! Please tell me that Sirius and Angel wil get together! Author's Response: ask no questions and i tell know lies, to be honest did you look at the pairings Report Review
I absolutely love it!! Angel and Sirius are so good together! Can't there be a way where she can love him? Author's Response: it's all in my head, don't worry Report Review
I love it! It made me smile. The thought of what Angel's going through sends chills down my spine. I really love your story, hope you update soon.Author's Response: don't worry i am, just so you know i've written up to chapter 6, which is my fav. by far yet Report Review
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