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Review #1, by Jessi_Rose

12th October 2006:

MC!!!! This is such a GOOD story! I love the anti-cliche!!! WONDERFUL job! I loved it!!! It's soooo... real life, ya know? There is one thing that could be fixed, and that's the *Flashback* thing. Have you tried using Italics? Or, a smoother transition than just popping that out? It doesn't make the read worse, but it disrupts the flow a bit. Other than that, Great job! 10-10.

Author's Response: ohh....thanks Jessi.....i'm glad that you read it...for some reason my italics don't work so i can't get italics.... i'm going to revise...eventually...i'm glad it seemed real and I'm really glad that you read it....THanks for reading it!!*HUggles*
MC

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Review #2, by Sly Witch

Play with fire

11th October 2006:

Hey!this story was pretty kul.U shud really think of writing a sequel where Hermione moves on/falls in love again/gets her revenge....nice title by the way.

Author's Response: thank you....i think i will but it's a matter of when i think of something brilliant or get a day off from rehearsals.....whichever comes first...but i'm glad you liked it...

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Review #3, by Dark Princess 06

Play with fire

6th October 2006:

Please write a sequal.

Author's Response: aww thanks i'm glad you liked it I'll seriously think about it....

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